| TonyZ |
Nice work, but the track is a little too mild
My suggestions:
There are many opportunities for great mind blowing pads
There are many opportunities for snare-rolls
There are many opportunities for bass-solos (with the twangy bass)
Make sure you crescendo (....oooo00000OOOOOOOO!!!!) your breaks, and slap some reverb/delay in the whole mix, if that suits your style.
I'm not too much of a fan of 7:00 songs that utilize the same boom-tiss-boom-tiss scheme
Drum variation is key for this one
See if you can "dirty up the sound" a bit - unless the pure square wave is your bag.
It's a catchy riff
The kick is a little too "sticky" for me- sounds quite keyboardish
Hopefully you'll keep at this thing - just remmeber the greatest producers are unmarried 45 year olds |
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