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Orange Project - The new world
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| Orange Project |
This tune isnt finshed jet. To finish it I need some feedback, please criticize anything u dont like tell me which parts u like I will really much appreciate it.
Cheers
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| Sunquest |
hey m8 , i wonder if ur the guy hosting the tiesto party in december ;) hmmmmmmz
anyways, about ur track, kick needs stronger, could use a little more reverby effect on ur synths and percs, i think your bass is off note to the melody as well hehe
structure is not bad,
keep working on ur mastering and the notes, make sure theyre not off note ;)
play around a little more
g'luck
peace out |
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| Orange Project |
Thank you for the comments. I hadnt noticed about the off-key, cheers for that.
About the tiesto thingy, yes it is me and a couple of collegues who are bringing tiesto to Mexico at the end of december hopefully for NYE if thats what you mean!:) |
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| Orange Project |
| The track has been updated. :) |
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| RickyM |
Hey Orange Project
To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well.
Rick |
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| Orange Project |
| quote: | Originally posted by RickyM
Hey Orange Project
To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well.
Rick |
working on it!;) |
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| RickyM |
| Good stuff - feel free to tear my next song apart when I upload it! |
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| Orange Project |
| Does it sound better now? |
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| RickyM |
Still bass sounds off key - ill tell you what I mean
Listen to your tune from 1.10 it sounds fine until 1.16/1.17 when the bass goes off key.
Maybe its just my F*cked up ears??? :D |
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| Orange Project |
| I know what u mean now, Ill try to fix it. Thanks for your help!:) |
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| Orange Project |
| I think Ive fixed it now (I hope). Have u uploaded ur tune? |
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| moolow |
Like the melodies a lot. :)
Maybe u could add a new bassline in it. Otherwise. Great track! |
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