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Subtle - Maranjana "NEW TRACK *sample* 1.7 MB"
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| Subtle |
ok, so I am almost finished with my new track, kind of progressive trance.. 128 BMP
Subtle - Maranjana
feedback request sample download:
Subtle - Maranja (sample) (right click dl) |
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| JoeyEnv |
Very dark intro. I think the strings could be richer ... break is immense, bass is deep and pretty atmospheric. Then ... it stopped. I think you should upload a sample over 2 minutes because you'd most likely get much more feedback. Pretty good though from what I can hear.
--joey |
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| Timothy |
| The chord progression and percussions are very nice. You should try finishing this :) |
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| ilovetrance18 |
i like this one, mate
i like the break, and same goes for the atmosphere, the percussions are ok, you should only work on the melodies a bit,
keep it up, mate:) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
When I first looked at the title for this track, I thought it said "Marijuana." This is probably a sign that I need to be getting more rest.
It's not bad. The pad seems kind of flat, if you ask me. There wasn't much more to go on, really. I like what you've got going, though. |
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| pho mo |
| Nice mood here, good melody. Not much to go on because of the short sample. I found the open hat panned full-right to be slightly odd, but then i'm listening in headphones so it probably doesn't matter. The pads and the main melody synth are a little flat, you can do some work on them to make them more interesting. I am looking forward to hearing the full version, as it sounds like you can make this track really beautiful :) |
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| Subtle |
thx, I will definitely try working out something with those pads, and leads, and that open hi hat probably needs more centre..
and Jax: u need a little rest man |
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| alexpea |
| this one is very deeo/emotional... Although I think the soundquality is rather muddy.. The track needs more high freq. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey nice chords in the intro,the pads sounds kinda weak maybe they would sound better a bit fatters?at 1.00 turns really wicked,waiting for the finishe thang ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Mane |
| very good pads, melodie is quiet good but whole track lack of energy you should add something to make it but except that its ok :) |
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| Klangzentrum |
*listening*
yeah, i agree about the chord-progression and synths...very nice...although the pad could be less "sawy", imo!
and it needs some more elements in the break, to make it sound more interesting...add some fx...
but i´m sure you´ll get a very nice result, when it´s finished! good luck, mate! ;) |
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| Subtle |
thx alot for the feedback guys.. I am at the moment struggling to fill up the empty parts in the breakdown..
:) |
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