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jex - Xanadu
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| thoughtlessjex |
Sometimes you can never predict how fast a song will come together. Change of Pace took me nearly two weeks, but this one was put together in a little over a night.
Poetry fans will be able to tell why this song got its name, I'm sure.
It's about 13:29, but I couldn't come up with a good way to shorten it, so I'm just posting it as it is.
jex - Xanadu
Whattaya think? |
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| Mane |
| nice beginning, i like fx's :) melodies are very good aswell, hmm i dont see anything wrong (from technical side i suck :P) very good track i enjoed it :) but its a bit to long:P cant you make it at least 8/9 min ? :P |
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| thoughtlessjex |
| quote: | | cant you make it at least 8/9 min ? |
I would, but I'm particularly attached to this song for some reason, and I can't make myself cut it up.
Dziękuję for the comment. Anyone else? |
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| kopi_luwak |
This is not really my style but imo those FX sounds are to louds, the rest sounds pretty good.
Kopi =o. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Yeh, I was wondering whether the FX were too loud. I didn't mind them, personally, but I wanted to post this here to find out if other peopls didn't like them. I probably should have mentioned that in the original post.
Thanks.
Any other critiques? |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
| quote: | Originally posted by thoughtlessjex
Yeh, I was wondering whether the FX were too loud. I didn't mind them, personally, but I wanted to post this here to find out if other peopls didn't like them. I probably should have mentioned that in the original post.
Thanks.
Any other critiques? |
LOL yup those FX are loud :toothless :toothless :toothless :toothless but i enjoyed the tune. kickass start! Those rythmes are great too.
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| thoughtlessjex |
Okay, I brought down some of the FX a bit. The rip may still be a little loud, but I think I like it that way, especially after the "... ancestral voices prophesying war..." part.
I also fixed a few balance issues. The lead and the words should be clearer now.
Thanks for the crits so far. |
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| RickyM |
| I like the dirty synth at the intro - great stuff! I like the whispering too. Nice filtering effects - its great when the bass comes in. I like the melody too, maybe not very original - but the fx make up for it, and the synths. Nicely chilled track, very long though!!! |
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