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Robert McKay - Rough
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| Trancescaper |
Hey guys!
I wanted to post one of my tracks and it would be great to hear ypur opinions but also tipps what could be done better. There are two different versions, the Short Cut and the Club Rework (personally I prefer the last one ;) ).
Thx in advance for your comments! :) :)
Rough [Short Cut]
Rough [Club Rework] |
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| kopi_luwak |
Listening,nice intro,the bass at some parts gets distorted,nice part at 2.20 but I think you need to work a bit in your filters in that part,they sound to low and kinda dirtys,at 7.05 the transition it's to heavy,I mean sounds to *impromptu* but in overall is a good track ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Amfora |
on my little computer speakers the kick is way to loud(maybe my speakers suck but i think that it is recorded much over 0 db)
i liked the basline and the synth in the main part. nice thing with the lead you did.
fix the prob with the kick and i think we have a nice hardtrancer over here |
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| Trancescaper |
| Thx for the comments. But I must say, I checked the BD once again and I don't think it's too loud... I also checked its db-values; seems quite normal to me... :rolleyes: |
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| Mane |
very good start i dont think that beat is too loud its ok great clap i like claps like that :) all sounds sound very clean very solid track i enjoyed it melodies are good too, keep it up :)
btw. what do you use to make tracks? |
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| H3lix |
WHOA :eek:
the club rework gave me an orgasm!
perfect energy in this one.
the combination key change/high pitched holding note was so awesome.
it would be even better if it had some mysterious vocals (random crap about space usually works) |
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| Trancescaper |
Hehe, thanks!;) ;)
@ Mane: I use Cubase SX and Soft-Synths for creating my music (btw: The lead on "Rough" is from a freeware-synthesizer, but it sounds great!!! :))
@ H3lix: I'm already thinking about adding some vocals, although I think that a non-vocal version has its own charme. ;) |
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| H3lix |
| with some vocals it could become as great as cern - the message, which was just :eyes: |
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| Amfora |
| listened it again now on my monitor speakers. And i have to say that its ok now. Srry for the negative comment :( Nice track M8 |
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| Sunquest |
hey m8 hows it goin :D
the reverse clap isnt good, but the bass kick and percs are rocking club style :D
the synth is MAAAAAAAASIVE damn thats sharp hehe
song overall has a dark melody, pretty kewl , very oldschool :)
keep it up m8 |
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| Trancescaper |
| Thx for all ur comments, I'm happy that u like it! :gsmile: :gsmile: :toocool: |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
OMG, old school hard trancer here!!!
Really well done mate, didn’t think there are still people left making this kind of trance :)
The sound quality is really good! The main lead synth is really well made, sharp and crisp, typical hard trance lead almost feels like it was made using a Virus. |
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