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| R2Project |
Ok,
I am new here, hopefully I'm not breaking any protocol by posting my first message in this forum ! Anyway I'm looking for comments on :
"I Believe" @ Soundclick.com
I'm lwas hoping for a Psytrance sort of field but I'm not sure I'm in the right ballpark ?
Anyway, I hope someone at least enjoys it as much as I did making it...
Andy |
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| RickyM |
Hey R2 project
First of all - nice intro - sets the tone
Some of the synth stabs sound out of sync
Maybe add a bit more bass
I don't know much about psytrance - not really my thing...
Sounded decent enough though - I like those sort of synth hits - the chord parts.
Actually its grown on me quite a bit!
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| R2Project |
Thanks Ricky,
Nice to get soem good feedback !
Andy |
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| cybernetica |
Of course you can post your Psytrance here, I do so as well ;)
The Beginning... interesting... swirling synths, the mad sample set the pace...
Then your beat coming in, I don't like it that much, it sounds too ..somewhat.. "empty", I don't know, did you use flangers on the Hihats? Try some compression on the hats.
your track is lacking a bassline, I recommend a deep 303.
The pitchbending, swirling synths in the background are interesting... some of the (well layered) arpeggiated/gated synths aren't that good, I'd recommend some LFO on the cutoff and maybe experiment a bit, they don't really sound professional...
Then to the end it's getting quite interesting... I see your track keeps evolving, you've got a lot of surprise moments, interesting ideas... but you should fix the technical matters... then you could go much further :)
let me guess... Inspiration: Hallucinogen? :)
If you found this helpful, It would be great if you could drop me a small comment on my psy track:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=222202
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| Digital Aura |
Hey ANDYC!
Good to have you onboard! This is the place where you can REALLY get your tunes ripped apart BUT GOOD!:nervous:
Loved the tune. I already critiqued it back at P5.com [don't mention that you use Project5 to make your stuff here...these guys are all Reason fans.]:eek: |
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| R2Project |
Cybernetica,
You've got some good points there, basslines are a weak point of mine I need to do some work on. I'm not convinced about the beat on this piece either !
I'm downloading your track now, comments a little later.
DA
I'll invade anywhere ....
Andy |
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| R2Project |
| quote: | Originally posted by cybernetica
let me guess... Inspiration: Hallucinogen?
Andy |
Actually strangely not ! More System 7 but gone well wrong along the way I think !
Andy |
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