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Ambia - Power Struggle (pg. 2)
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| davidemonin |
| Ok , nice tune overall, some cool melodies, but that kick needs to really improve, to light and sharp. On top of that the track needs more lows imo, but if you get good and better pounding kick that can do the trick i think. MSN me when/if you update your tune. |
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| DRM |
you know i like this joe :) All your tunes always have something interesting about them thats not the normal thing to do while at the same time having a familiarity that you can relate to.
Production wise, kick is a bit lost as other have said. Bassline is very nice (Y) the screechy thing is a very nice touch and helps drive the track along. Melodies are all sweet if all a little short. Percussion is ok but the hats that are panned right are too overpowering and im not really keen on the clap.
Overall a decent tune tho mate :D |
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| Cloudburst |
Sorry mate, one day too late.. :p
Anyways, this is good! I like the melody, although I would have made some slight changes. The dirty synth that fades in about 01:37 is a bit too loud imo. Other than that good work on this one! Nothing ground breaking, but it does the job. :) |
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| Shepless |
Hey Joe!!
-Bass goes really well with bassdrum, top job!
-Has a lot of energy in it, top notch!!
-Loved the acid, very different but works a treat.
-Love the first break, bass changes were spot on, came in at the exact right point!
-Powerfull and driving melody top it off
Only complaint is the lack of a "BOOM" when it all come back in, aside form that top effort guvnor :P
Keep it up!
Shep |
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| Fundamental |
| Thanks for the comments guys, very appreciated! :) |
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| Lightworks |
Glad to see you're upping new stuff :)
Gotta say I like this, one of your best so far. I like the bassline and drive, the overall track is nicely structured as well. Fine main melody - not anything that will stick to the head, but it works for me.
Take care,
Wim |
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| Ian^ |
| checking out now joe, will give u a review when i'vel istened :) |
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| Ian^ |
| quote: | Originally posted by Ian
checking out now joe, will give u a review when i'vel istened :) |
and I still plan to :p |
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| chris_spence |
Hey mate!
Rather nice track u have mate, not really fond on the kick tho! seems a bit empty if u kno wat i mean! Has a really nice Bass tho, kinda plods along nicely with the rest of the track! i agree with the DRM with that Screech sound, at about 2.30s in it seems its out of sync a bit, just doesnt sound right to me! its only for a few seconds, so not to worry! Break is really nice, not to fond on the melodies tho! But all in all, really nice track mate! Thanx for sharing!
Chris:) |
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| chris_spence |
Hey mate!
Rather nice track u have mate, not really fond on the kick tho! seems a bit empty if u kno wat i mean! Has a really nice Bass tho, kinda plods along nicely with the rest of the track! i agree with the DRM with that Screech sound, at about 2.30s in it seems its out of sync a bit, just doesnt sound right to me! its only for a few seconds, so not to worry! Break is really nice, not to fond on the melodies tho! But all in all, really nice track mate! Thanx for sharing!
Chris:) |
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| Fundamental |
Cheers for the review Chris, and thanks to everyone else for their comments. :D
(and hurry up dammit Ian! :p) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Those four sixteenth note synth stabs in the first few seconds were a real non-sequiter. I didn't like them all that much.
I like your percs in the intro.
Yay! My parents bought me Sprite and I didn't have to ask for it!
Cool acid stuff at around 3:00.
I think your bass needs to be EQ'd off somewhere south of about 90 Hz. It's really rumbly as it is.
Overall, not bad. A nice tune with good energy. |
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