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| dj dawson uk |
ahh it's been so long since i produced anything..
but here's my new incarnation - new work
steven dawson - new work
everything else i have ever done has sucked in comparison.. however.. i know my percs still suck :(
im going to be adding in some more counter melodies... but this is its current form :)
gimme all your criticism please
Steve |
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| DRM |
| link wont work steve, sort it out :p |
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| DRM |
tis not bad like steve :)
percussion as u say is the weak point. There just seems to be a lack of it atm makes and wot is there is very standard fare. Bassline is ok but maybe leave that in as a sub and drop a rolling bassline over the top to give the track more drive. The lead sounds very vanguardy if thats wot it is. Needs a bit of tweaking to give it a cleaner sound. quite like the evil sounding saw bass pad (Y)
decent melody overall too. bit more work and it could come along nicely :) |
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| quote: | Originally posted by dj dawson uk
everything else i have ever done has sucked in comparison.. however.. i know my percs still suck :(
im going to be adding in some more counter melodies... but this is its current form :)
gimme all your criticism please
Steve |
0:00 - 1:00 Very long beat intro. Maybe shorten a bit or even remove??
1:30 intersting pads/saw bass 1:40 Sounds good. nice sounds :toothless
I like the rythme. very catchy. tappen me feet tune :toothless
2:50 beat kicks in. It's all good.
-> 3:59 I thik i was expecting a bit more of a crecendo, but the song seems to windes up pretty fast. maybe add some more pads?
This is a great track. from 1:00 to 3;40 the track kicks ass. I was expecting it to rise up again after the 4;00 min mark but the song finishes up. I want more!:D :D it definitely needs those counter melodies.
Its a great track. Cant wait to hear the finished result. |
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