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[Trance] Yarune - Garden Of Contrasts (Original) (pg. 2)
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Yeh the buildup promises something else than a happy melody hehe.
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Indeed, but thats what i kinda disliked tbh.
There for this didn't touch me like Horizon. |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
Indeed, but thats what i kinda disliked tbh.
There for this didn't touch me like Horizon. |
Next time I put a happy melody in, somebody shoot me! hehe |
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| EtherealSL |
hey... listening:
acid sounds cool, is it me or is that kick a little too strong? And are hi ends suprressed a little too much?
percussion is nicely done and i'm liking the melodies. Bass compliments well.
and the entire track turns upside down. The bassline completely changes after the breakdown. The melody sounds good but it's just very random. It's like two different songs.
Production is solid but melodically, i'm confused. |
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| Jay M |
| Hehe, I understand. Thanks! |
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| Barachem |
Nive track, solid production and to me it's also melodically and harmoniously consistent.
The two melody lines you use are consistent to each other, but i can understand why others have such problems with them.
And the "happy" melody doesn't seem that happy to me, but more brightly.
Let me post a link to a track of mine to show why i'm able to connect both melodies.
Progressive Existence:crazy:
It's not very well mastered and the instruments sound quite gamish, but it's the principle that counts.
But keep the good work up.
It's good to hear someone deviating from the "rules" of trancemaking. |
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| cybernetica |
This one is good, the best "amateur" track I heard this week :)
the main melody is nice, how you let it slowly fade in, the multiple melody voices harmonize nicely :) ... Works well with the acid sounds, good panning there. Production is very good, except the kick which is slightly too dominant ,as already mentioned. |
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| david.michael |
Just a few quick comments:
- Nice sound quality
- I found the bassline a little boring... as in its actual tone
- Cool break. :)
I feel like it could have been more driving and powerful too, but take my comments with a grain of salt. I am obsessed with really heavy "big deal" climaxes when it comes to trance. ;)
Nice track. :) |
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| Jay M |
| Thanks guys! Useful reviews :) |
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| Jay M |
| Hey! I uploaded an update, same link. Have a listen! |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Good hook.
I'd say you start to bring the melody in too soon, but then I'm the one that brings his leads in at around 7:00, so you're perfectly welcome to pay no attention to me.
Overall, not bad. Pretty standard Yarune fare, as far as my knowledge of "standard Yarune fare" goes. It still goes on my "I like it" list. |
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| zizack |
| I really like this song a lot. Except for the melody, this song has a very Christopher Lawrence sound to it. maybe make the main meoldy a little more aggressive or darker and it could be a great trancer. |
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