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Joey Waters -- Annura. *Melodic.*
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| JoeyEnv |
Just finished my latest project, Annura. For anyone and evryone inspired by Trance. Hope it makes you warm inside. :)
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128kbps...7.36...Listen Here
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Feedback appreciated.
-Joey |
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| RickyM |
Nice bass at the start here - maybe filter it a bit higher - it is maybe a bit too low for a rolling bass.
Nice percussion and effects used there - and when the synth comes in it is very happy sounding.
Nice melody you have there - very warm sounding.
I like a lot of your songs Joey - you have good warm melodies. |
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| Massive84 |
Hey.
The kick seems to clip on my headphones, could use more treble tbh as well.
The bass i really dig, love a deep bass :).
hmm the percussion need to be better, they are lacking drive and the clap is kinda weak.
The intro starts tough and dark, but suddenly a happy lead jumps in. I didn't like that.
K seems repetitive till the piano.
And the sample ends, work on the beat more i say, make it more uplifting and driving. |
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| ronk |
OK first of all I think there's too much compression on the master.
Percs are good but I think you need more there.
The drumloop "Elements" is too fruity, I think you should change it a bit..
Piano is nice, bass is very deep and ok, kick's good.
At 5:47 I think you should make the drum kick a lil louder, or use your "normal" kick.
I really like the melody.
Nice FX you've got there...and I think the fx on the melody outro need to be louder and longer cuz after the outro there's the bass which is quiet strong.
All in all I think you did a good job (melody is awesome). |
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| alexpea |
| Man, you REALLY need to fix the kickdrum and the bass. They clash together and make the sound disorted. And yeah, this one is over-compressed. You can hear that at 02.10 when the kickdrum and the bass is removed for a little moment. All the other elements rises in volume instantly. That's a sign of over-compression ;) But when this is said, I love the structure and all the small melodies flicking around in the soundpicture. Hmmm... But after listening 3.30 into the song, I think it gets rather boring. There's absolutely no variation in the percussian. Those shake-thingies are getting rather annoying also :rolleyes: But good try. Nice harmonies and a very happy feel to it! For sure! :toocool: |
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| sooper |
Energetic trancer you've got here!
I'd like to hear the melody introduced in a different way, because it clashes with the dark mood you set throughout the intro...
Its such an uplifting melody! Very sweet. |
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