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EnergiyaBuran - Pionir
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| eulerfx |
Isn't Buran the Russian version of the Space Shuttle, or more clearly the Space Shuttle is the USA version of the Buran?
Anyway your song:
- Bass synth in first part is a bit overdriven, or something. Too muddy and almost sounds like noise.
- Nice goa sounds that come in at 0:40
- Those snippets of Russian 'firt flight' stuff are a bit cheesy
- I almost cannot hear the hi-hats and snare
- This kind of hard, psy trance is not really my style, so I can't comment on your melodies, but your song structure needs some variation.
- song gets repetitive, so add some more LFO modulation
- EQ the sounds so the whole track doesnt seem noisy... |
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| TimeWarper |
OK, I'm listening to it...
- The Bassdrum isn't "punchy" enough.
- A big lack of high frequencies... So the mix isn't brighter as it should.
- The main lead is cool, I like it.
- The mix is too low...
- We can't hear the bass enough.
But it's a good track, continue on that way ;) |
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| brunoj_rs |
Thank you guys for listening.
@eulerfx:
Yes, that is correct. Buran is the Russian (actually Soviet) version of the Space Shuttle, Energiya is the rocket that carries it.
About the sound: it is supposed to sound distorted and unclean, contrary to mainstream trance. We will look to take your other comments into the building of the next version of the track.
@TimeWarper:
Actually hi frequencies are breaking our ears here. I suppose we must get another sound system/monitors.
We well work on both bassdrum and bass.
Once again, thank you for your constructive criticism. |
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