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Space Pirate - Lost in the haunted planet [256kbps, FULL, Feedback plz]
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| R.j. |
well i decided to this track in a different alias (since it would fit the style)
Only things i didnt create was the ambience @ 1:24, and the staticy voice , i got those from a sample cd. i created 4 sfx to make a 'kind of' melody.
some feedback would be nice.:cool:
Space Pirate - Lost in the haunted planet |
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| samcook |
| nice track...very nice track...but with a voice (speech or sing) i think the track comes better for a dj....... :) |
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| R.j. |
| quote: | Originally posted by samcook
nice track...very nice track...but with a voice (speech or sing) i think the track comes better for a dj....... :) |
thanks for the tip;)
more feedback is welcome from anyone:) |
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| sooper |
Hey RJ,
I like the slow beat - great perc intro.
I'm getting distortion on the kick, but I think that's just my headphones.
Cool use of fx and that ambience thing.
Overall, it has a very minimal feel, but I like that - it allows me to settle into a slow funky groove. I do think the tune would benefit from some sparse piano notes hinting at a melody. And maybe a few more layers of pads.
Its nice to hear something different! Looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor |
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| Sunquest |
hey man
ur quality is really kewl, i like the kick and bass and beats, overall really dark feel to it, not my style but im sure plenty will like, it kinda fits in the dark ambient section hehe
keep it up
l8r |
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| Trazedict |
hey man. good stuff so far. im really diggin the ambient, hauntish type noises. they definately fit the track name :D
i feel my feet bouncin to the nice groovy beat you got going. fab stuff here. i agree with sooper that some sporadic piano hits would sound good, but its definately fine the way it is :) |
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| R.j. |
hey,
thank you to all who took a listen:)
and yes, i am thinking of adding more of a melody, with a piano/spacey type of sound, along with some more pads.;)
thank you for the suggestions.
RJ |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Woo, nice percs.
The FX in the break are kind of creepy. They sound like Metroid FX.
I like how it doesn't really change all that much. It adds a good chill kind of feel. |
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