| sooper |
Hi,
not bad at all for your first attempt!
some cool sounds in there. Over all, the song seems to lack stucture and direction. I like the bass, though its kinda quiet, it has definate funk potential.
i think the song needs quite a few more layers.. pads and percs and some fx.
anyway, keep at it, you'll only get better and better!
and keep posting,
trevor |
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