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Subtle presents Subtara - Maranjana (Original Mix) *UPDATED FINAL VERSION* 320 kbps
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| Subtle |
Hey, I just finished of this track.. this should be the final version..
it kinda reflects my own producing style, and what I am personally trying to make..
Subtle presents Subtara - Maranjana (original mix) (right click dl)
so I kinda got to finish this track.. suggestions are welcome still.. as Im not quite sure its the done deal yet!!
share, abuse, hate, like or love.. just let me know ;) |
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| Klangzentrum |
...nice percs...but there´s some disturbing noise in the background...sounds like a vinyl...
...bass sounds cool...gives a really deep feeling to the track...
...some more elements like whoshes and so on would be nice in the buildup...
...wow, nice pad, i like the melody...reminds me of something...
...sound quality is quite good...but why have you cutoff everything above 16khz?
very nice track, dude! ;) |
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| Timothy |
| The percussion is great as allways. The fx are really nice too. I like the clap/snare. The song is a bit too repetive imo. The track is very well produced. :) |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by Klangzentrum
...nice percs...but there´s some disturbing noise in the background...sounds like a vinyl...
...bass sounds cool...gives a really deep feeling to the track...
...some more elements like whoshes and so on would be nice in the buildup...
...wow, nice pad, i like the melody...reminds me of something...
...sound quality is quite good...but why have you cutoff everything above 16khz?
very nice track, dude! ;) |
thx for the comment m8, the disturbing noise is an additional bass.. (or more like the first intended bass) it kinda lacks a lot of whoosh and whiish.. I adjusted the cuttoff of the lead, guess it didnt help much.. :) |
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| doreemix |
hi there!
nice tune!... as posted before, audio quality needs attention. I like the structure of the track, and the style, but maybe you can try to mute the percs in some parts to keep up the "fresh" of the track.
saludos! |
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| anth_on_e |
| after the drop when the beat comes in, it sort of just comes in suddenly. MAybe you could add like a snare roll or something to add some tension or something. |
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| The Drow |
Nice pads.
I didn't like the snare.
Actually really good pads.
Send me a remix pack.
Repeatitve but it's prog so it's good.
4/5 |
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| State of Matter |
I love the percs in this, very tribal.
The FX are nice and scary. Bass end is aggressive.
Synth sounds are solid. And I love those pads.
Nice work, not much I can fault that hasn't already been said. |
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| Subtle |
anth_on_e: thx.. I should definitely get some tension there.. its coming way too sudden.. :)
doreemix: thx for that tip.. its pretty straight on those percussions
State Of matter: thanks.. glad u like it..
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| TOR |
very cool sounds and effects you've got there
the mix seems to be a bit too bright, though. the track needs more low end
and as mentioned before, some whooshes would be nice to lead us into and out of the breakdown. |
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| Jay M |
There are a lot of pads in here. In the first few minutes it doesn't seem to fit together all too well.
The fx don't seem to be under control, and they are a bit simple. But it seems you made them yourself and thats a good thing.
Now the break is there a bit too sudden.
The lead synth coming here is ok, and so is the melody.
Overall the percs are pretty good.
Overall not bad, I began to like the track after the break. Keep up! |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
Hey Suble.
Bass & drums are sweet.
the distorted gurgle sound throughout this song is hypnotising! :toothless :p
3:50 this emotional melody that come in is a refreshing change.
5:15 the drums catch me by surprise. I think you need to build up to the percussion with a drum roll or a beat that fades in. Background drums may also add to emotion & build it up more before the bass drum kicks in.
the track finishes very nicely. :p
Great work on this track suble. Very trancy. Im impressed by you drum layers. |
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