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Amurai - Frozen Tears (Need Feedback ) (pg. 2)
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| doreemix |
melodic trance is not exactly what i am into, but man, you have a good material here, really nice melody... imo i like that 'reverbed' clap, remember that a track needs some equilibrium, your clap sounds dirty wich makes a nice contrast with the clean melody, maybe just low a bit the volume of the clap (or extend the duration of the clap and remove some reverb) or it can turnout to be a little anoying if you use it constantly, an other option could be use 2 kinds of claps (keep that one and use a new clap on other parts of the track and switch between them). It also gives some personality to your tune, unless your goal is create a classic-stylish track.
anyway, i would like to hear it when it's complete. |
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| gerrycueto |
| I think the long clap would be good for quick breakdown... like 2-4 bars... then go back to a normal beat... seriously less is more :P in this case at least |
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| andreas1999 |
sounds great! clap works great and everything else as well :). only complaint (which i know isn't going to change) is that it would have been nice with something else than the standard filtered-saw-lead-synth as the lead synth. just can't stand that sound anymore, it's been around since '97 and it's not getting better :)
but your track is great anyhow! |
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| eulerfx |
- for a second there, in the intro, i thought i was listening to Tiesto mix of Silence. must be the bass and the clap together :p
- good use of multiple synths and intruments in general to create the atmosphere for the song |
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| Luke Terry |
the clap is fine. infact the whole production is pretty much spot on. i suggest you could use the acid a bit more and bring the string in a bit more discreetly
apart from that it's really good, any chance of a 192k when it's finished please :)
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| moolow |
Really nice tune u got there ;)
Love everything about it.. Good work!
/Jeanet |
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| coldheaven |
hi!
first of all i wanna say i really like your sig!
to the track now: sound needs def. more high frequencies. got that clap from TTE? Busted! No, just kidding, really like it! Drums need more power ans seperation, cant really seperate bass from kickdrum. but i like your style, really energetic trance IMO. I'm diggin' your acid sounds, really driving, they match the other sounds really good. waiting to hear the full one! |
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| gerrycueto |
| quote: | Originally posted by Luke Terry
the clap is fine. infact the whole production is pretty much spot on. i suggest you could use the acid a bit more and bring the string in a bit more discreetly
apart from that it's really good, any chance of a 192k when it's finished please :)
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I guess that's your opinion, but I think the clap is a distraction if it's being used throughout the entire track. |
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| Manvel |
| quote: | Originally posted by Luke Terry
the clap is fine. infact the whole production is pretty much spot on. i suggest you could use the acid a bit more and bring the string in a bit more discreetly
apart from that it's really good, any chance of a 192k when it's finished please :)
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I have no clue when the track is going to be finished :sadgreen: I'm stuck on the break...
about the clap - I'm going to have to work on it. Its a bit too loud imo now that i listen to it again. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Sounds good,I agree about the clap,it's kinda distracting all that reverb,the rest sounds pretty good but the sample it's really short so I cannot give you a real opinion though,so far sounds great ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| sublimeaura |
| im digging this track. it would definately sit in armin's box given a bit more oomph! |
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| trance-ecj |
this one neeeeeeds to get done!
liking it very much! |
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