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[Hard Prog] David - Physical Mist
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| Trazedict |
hey guys
just finished this new tune of mine. id classify it as melodic, hard progressive. I know you guys are into trance but give this a try.
and of course, id really appreciate if you left a comment
LINK HERE
[Hi-fi and Lo-fi]
Name: Physical Mist
Time: 11:34 (dont worry, it goes by fast)
Quality: 128kbps (for now)
Hard Melodic Progressive
enjoy :D |
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| retiro |
| Nice ideas you have used here but I'd personally like to see the kick and bass volumes increase just to add a bit of clarity to the mix! Think it kinda goes on a bit - maybe if you shortened it to about 8-9mins it would be better! Good work though! |
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| Trazedict |
| quote: | Originally posted by retiro
Nice ideas you have used here but I'd personally like to see the kick and bass volumes increase just to add a bit of clarity to the mix! Think it kinda goes on a bit - maybe if you shortened it to about 8-9mins it would be better! Good work though! |
hey thanks!
turned up the kick volume just now.
ill work on shortening it too :D heh i originally had it at 10:30 and thought i should make it longer. guess i was wrong =P |
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| Merlot |
agreed with the above. you have some good ideas.
- maybe used the reverse crash way to much. Look for other ways to transition other elements in and out of the mix.
- Need a stronger kick drum and clap.
- That choir voice is way to loud and in the front of the mix. You can barely hear the filtered lead b/c of it. EQ everything more to create room for everthing. |
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| Trazedict |
| quote: | Originally posted by Merlot
agreed with the above. you have some good ideas.
- maybe used the reverse crash way to much. Look for other ways to transition other elements in and out of the mix.
- Need a stronger kick drum and clap.
- That choir voice is way to loud and in the front of the mix. You can barely hear the filtered lead b/c of it. EQ everything more to create room for everthing. |
yeah, took out some of the reverses. fixed the drum + clap
i purposely made the choir voice thing loud. its a large part of the song. i will put in not so up front in the song though, good idea :D
thanks for the comment buddy :) |
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