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new tune Trance - feedbak please
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| ichiro |
hi,
A quick sample of some more filth im trying to make.
any feedbak welcome especially regarding the era of this type of trance.
thx
-- zYon --
(sry it only 128k) |
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| websley |
Sounds actually pretty quality. BUT MAN: MY EARS HURT BECAUSE OF THE DETUNING. PLEASE LEAVE BEHIND THE IDEA THAT IT'S COOL, CAUSE IT'S NOT!
Nice on the drums. could need some more detail, though. For now, I just let you adjust that little "error", ok? You could also be more frugal with the detuning, but DO something about it.
O, btw: Yer avatar is causing me nightmares!:nervous::crazy: |
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| ichiro |
thx, I wanted it detuned to try and be dark, but you righ it is to DEtuned-
here is an updated 'happy' version
-- Zyon 2 -- |
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| websley |
Still sounds a bit annoying, perhaps it would help if you decrease the detuning width just a little bit more. Or maybe: throw a little background-sequence melody in it that has the same detuning, but then in the opposite way compared to the main melody-synth.
I think the drums need more FX like reverb, (I'm not sure if delays) and perhaps some more detail. That cymbal Crash needs reverb for sure!
-weBs |
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