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Paulo Der Munoz - The Dutch Girl
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| Massive84 |
Hiya
That high fx is a bit to loud i think.
nice Kick.
so far intro pretty empty mate, try to add more perc and different fx sounds.
That synth is just to soft on it's own.
Weird gated pad or something is cool.
1.36 very cool how it jumps to the acid part. It happens sudden and the transition is good, so thats a good thing.
no Actual lead in the intro/build nothing that really stands out, which is to bad.
Break, bring out those strings more infront, make them scream.
Climax wasn't that well, synth is to average and to soft, melody is medicore, but not bad tbh.
Look at your levels and EQ, try to bring the theme infront with the kick and bass, and the rest on the background. Also work on the arrangements a bit more. And take your synths wisley next time :)
thats it hehe. |
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| PDM |
Thanks for the comments. Massive84, gonna work on some of the points you made.
Anyone else?
C'mon, just one review?
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by PDM
Thanks for the comments. Massive84, gonna work on some of the points you made.
Anyone else?
C'mon, just one review?
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ya ing sad, i see you reviewing people, but no one that returns the favor. |
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| breakaholic |
Agree that the track could use some more elements in percussion and fx department, sounds bit incomplete now. Also that filtered synth at 3.39 needs some polishing. The gated synth at the end is too weak too.
The track has potential though, some good parts in it. Needs just more work :) |
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