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Luke Cloudwalker - Sad City (full 128)
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| Mane |
hello
its my new track under new nick name heh lol, first one was more chilly this is more trance, i hope you will like it, all feedbacks are very welcome :)
greetings
Lukas
UPDATE
"http://www.sitesled.com/members/mane/luke%20cloudwalker%20-%20sad%20city%20[final][192].mp3"
copy link to browse ;), ive made some changes here and there :p enjoy :) |
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| Massive84 |
Nice Kick.
The hihat sounds a bit on the background, i prefer more upfront hihats tbh.
THat synth at 2.10 sounds nice with the melody.
Break sounds oke, not sure about the pinao, sounds random somtimes but then i like it.
I can't really hear an actuall lead or melody which is a bummer.
I'd also recommand looking at the arrangements maybe some more fx.
Further nice mixing IMO.
Thats all |
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| 1mason11 |
hi,
great stuff again.like the new kick,also the piano,good chilled athmosphere in the break:) perhaps the main melo could be stronger or more intensive.but fine work;)
thx rialto024 |
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| MK-S |
| I like it, the kick as mentioned is strong. Your ideas are sound but nothing really 'stands out'. You definitely have good production skills, so keep it up. |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
Gday Lukas :D
Nice work here m8!
The bass drumm is supreme. It is truely thumpen thru my cans!
The hihats are a little soft. I like how you panned it around.
1:10 great rythme!
2:07 another great rythme layer. The pads give this tune awesome emotion.
the pianos are 'OK'
4:10 sweet. I was hoping for a greater creshendo
3:35 sweeter! :p I now like you hihat work.
6:30 love the break beat! :p :p :p tho it stops suddenly -> weird.
thanx for sharing Lucas. |
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| Digital Aura |
Bass is definitely solid as mentioned...
The break is nice! Elements tend to get a tad monotonous at times.
I was hoping for a catchy melodic part for that piano... I still don't understand the melody.
They say that if a listener can predetermine how the song is developing it actually is more enjoyable....with this one, I just don't hear a melody and lose interest.
Sorry. Maybe just me.;) |
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| Mane |
| thx a lot for feedbacks, really apreciate, about track am glad you like it at some points :p i will try do a lot better track next time heh :p |
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| JohnOC |
very nice track! the melody perhaps needs to be tuned a bit more, and just to fix some levels. but there is great potential here and over time im sure u will learn the small details that makes a track more fluent
great work mane :) |
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| staticblue |
>at first i wasnt too sure about the subbass, but actually it flows very well with the layers on top :)
>great job for the percs
>synths layers in the buildup are great, so is the mixing in general.
>kick is really lush
>around 3:10 i expected some more dreamy pads :(
>main melody is kinda dreamy, i like this.. very relaxing and great atmosphere !
>>> good job, i'm really impressed man.
keep them up :)
static blue |
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| Sunquest |
nice kick indeed :)
i think ur missing a main hi hat between the kicks, so itll make the clap sound more clapy
nice pads, melody is ok, kinda ....:rolleyes:
keep at it m8,
hear u l8r ;) |
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| Mane |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
melody is ok, kinda ....:rolleyes:
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hmm crapy hehe?? , thx for comments really apreciate :) |
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