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Steve Callaghan vs Frase - The Element
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| Frase |
Jus finished a track with my good friend Steve Callaghan, would love it if you guys could have a listen to the sample and maybe post your opinions? :)
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Steve Callaghan vs Frase - The Element
Many Thanks :) |
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| ilovetrance18 |
hey guys,
i think the melody has a lot of potential, but still needs some work to tweak it right, i would also change the notes a bit, but all in all really good melody. I think it needs lot more effects in the breakdown, to make some more impressive atmoshpere or something, and needs a bit more effects at the ends too. I would use a submelody too buildung up to the main melody or something. The percs are great, the clap needs definitely more reverb and some delay i think. Add some more drive to the bassline, like above & beyond do, try making some driving sub-bass or something, the pads are great:)
overally it needs some more work on it, some more tweaking, mastering right, and you guys will have a quality track:)
btw, what software do you use for producing music?
cheers,
Peter:) |
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| Frase |
Hosting is down Perry - should be up soon.
Thanks for the comments ilovetrance :)
We know we've got some stuff to do to make it amazing, but its our real first collab and only my second track in six months of production :)
We're using Logic 5.5 on PC with VST's like Vanguard, Pro53 and the in-built logic ones :) |
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| Digital Aura |
I like the idea behind this...potential here? I THINK SO!:cool:
Interesting melody! I like it...but its not too syrupy..you know...its got hooks, but not sickly sweet and annoying like some hooks.
Love the instruments too...i agree that some counter-melody needs to be intertwined into its development!;)
And needs a good mixdown fo sho!
Other than that... WAY TO GO GUYS!:) |
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| Frase |
| quote: | Originally posted by Digital Aura
I like the idea behind this...potential here? I THINK SO!:cool:
Interesting melody! I like it...but its not too syrupy..you know...its got hooks, but not sickly sweet and annoying like some hooks.
Love the instruments too...i agree that some counter-melody needs to be intertwined into its development!;)
And needs a good mixdown fo sho!
Other than that... WAY TO GO GUYS!:) |
Thanks for the kind words Digital Aura :)
Seems like we're gonna go over this one again and pick up what people have said and make some alterations :) |
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| staticblue |
great sounds here ;)
the tune is nothing special for me :( and the main synth could use some more strengh.
good percussions and bass and counter synths and ambiances :)
keepytup |
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| Frase |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
great sounds here ;)
the tune is nothing special for me :( and the main synth could use some more strengh.
good percussions and bass and counter synths and ambiances :)
keepytup |
Thanks for your comments mate - much appreciated
off topic but, im loving your work at the moment :) |
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| staticblue |
thanks :D
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| Frase |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
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| JohnOC |
firstly, the sound quality is great! top production skillz here.
the compression on the mix out seems to alternate everytime there is a large kick or climax? might want to sort that. melody is nice and whiteroomish, good pads too.
after the break the tune kinda wanders and loses interest
try get some more elements in there to maintain interest
:)
massive potential here |
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| Frase |
| quote: | Originally posted by JohnOC
firstly, the sound quality is great! top production skillz here.
the compression on the mix out seems to alternate everytime there is a large kick or climax? might want to sort that. melody is nice and whiteroomish, good pads too.
after the break the tune kinda wanders and loses interest
try get some more elements in there to maintain interest
:)
massive potential here |
Cheers for the kind words John, encouraging to hear about the potential as we were just happy getting some music down and out there.
I'm looking forward to getting back to going over and alter some parts so we can start to push it more
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