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Al Azar - Random Act Of Noise Pollution (Swidge's Polluting Presence Mix) (pg. 2)
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| Massive84 |
ya great traack
only thing i didn't like was that low octave synth.
Hmm there is an acid sweep that remind me alot on bass shuttle :)
Great production. |
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| NoisyNeil |
Thanks, Haak, mef and Massive :)
I think i'm going to start over new and change the build-up aswell as the proportions between the volumes (I think that's what ppl call mastering here :stongue: )
I'm still pretty much amazed that everybody likes it, I had my doubts in the beginning haha, ... but thanks a lot :) I'm very pleased...
btw Massive, what do you mean by "low octave synth?" :) |
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| AlphaStarred |
| sounds pretty cool..it could def. use some work tho imo, sounds a bit empty at some points, but def. not bad for a first post..keep it up :) |
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| Syeker |
Sounds pretty good to me :). The synth that's introduced at the 3:20 sounds cool but some panning to the left and the right would be better, you know what i mean ;). Then it's the structure, which could be better but is your first try, isn't it?
Nice work :D |
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| NoisyNeil |
| quote: | Originally posted by Syeker
Sounds pretty good to me :). The synth that's introduced at the 3:20 sounds cool but some panning to the left and the right would be better, you know what i mean ;). Then it's the structure, which could be better but is your first try, isn't it?
Nice work :D |
thanks for the feedback dude :) it's my first post on TA yes, but i've tried very much over the last few years ;)
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| Massive84 |
that synth starts at 2.08
its not that i didn't like it , just didn't feel that the sound matched the rest. But thats taste :) |
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| Syeker |
| quote: | Originally posted by NoisyNeil
thanks for the feedback dude :) it's my first post on TA yes, but i've tried very much over the last few years ;)
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I'm kindda in the same situation (I posted once though). Anyway keep it up :) |
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| NoisyNeil |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
its not that i didn't like it , just didn't feel that the sound matched the rest. But thats taste :) |
I get your point :)
I don't feel the same about that synth, but that's also taste :p
it's just good to hear what everybody thinks, so I can do something with it next time...
| quote: | Originally posted by Syeker
I'm kindda in the same situation (I posted once though). Anyway keep it up :) |
thanks :) "practise" and "experimenting" are the keywords in producing, so thats exactly what we should do :D
btw. where can I listen to your production(s)? |
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| Syeker |
| quote: | thanks :) "practise" and "experimenting" are the keywords in producing, so thats exactly what we should do :D
btw. where can I listen to your production(s)? |
Why when i read it sounds funny? :conf:. The tunes I've made untill now are to amateurish to be posted here (you know with Mr. Mistery, Mart & Icone still active in this forum). I'm currently working on a fully well produced tune along with a friend but the thing is we don't always have time to sit back and finish it I'll post it here as soon as its finished :) |
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| MaRt |
| quote: | Originally posted by Syeker
The tunes I've made untill now are to amateurish to be posted here (you know with Mr. Mystery, Mart & Icone still active in this forum). |
Nothing's too amateur for the amateur music producers forum! By the way, Mr Mystery is doing mandatory army service, I've all but given up on music production and Icone rarely posts tracks due to label commitments. Plus Mike Foyle and Sunquest usually only ever post samples (and bad quality samples at that). Don't feel intimidated or inferior, because after all receiving a bit of constructive criticism can help a lot. |
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| NoisyNeil |
| quote: | Originally posted by Syeker
Why when i read it sounds funny? :conf:. The tunes I've made untill now are to amateurish to be posted here (you know with Mr. Mistery, Mart & Icone still active in this forum). I'm currently working on a fully well produced tune along with a friend but the thing is we don't always have time to sit back and finish it I'll post it here as soon as its finished :) |
You should do whatever you want too, as Mart already concluded in his post above: the Amateur Music Section is for yourself too see what others think of your music. And what you do with their critisism is your own choice :)
The deal is not too get yourself a recordlabel or anything, however that would be nice. But that should never be your target, I would say :)
And don't let yourself get insecure by those people who now have a recordlabel and stuff, cause don't forget: they started small too :) |
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| coldheaven |
| great tune, i like the bassdrum, hard and pumping, great mastering. maybe lacks of high frequencies a bit? compared to the bassdrum, the bass is a little bit too weak i think! just a little! |
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