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ambient/chillout - the orange theme [space pirate 1st n 2nd movement chill out mix]
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| RIPassion |
I like it :)
I'm a sucker for the clockwork orange theme song in all of its forms.
I do have some constructive:
Everyting is just cluttered up in the middle :)
The melody just stays put in the middle and so do it's delays... the strings come right in behind it... again in the middle... the pads ring around the middle, and the fx thing stays RIGHT in the middle!
Spread it all out :) I like the sounds, but I think the effects on them are done no justice by just sitting in the middle.
Unless, of course, you are producing with one speaker ;) jk
Also, even though it is chillout, you could experiment with a few odd, trippy sounding percs here and there. :)
maybe a deep, low reverbed kick and an airy clap here and there, maybe some bells, whatever :)
I rikey :)
Holy crap that's a lot of :)s |
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| RickyM |
Hey SPace Pirate
I like the way you bring the main melody in at the start - you have to listen really hard to hear it.
Nicely chilled remix indeed. I like the reverb on the bells/organs - really widens the mix.
Nicely made mate, though a few percs here and there wouldn't go a miss. |
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| R.j. |
thanks for the feedback, i'll see about adding some perc, and panning a few things here and there.
rj / space pirate |
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| Subtle |
| nice introduction.. i can hear the orange theme kraft out of the swooshes.. dont fancy all those FX.. just some of em.. the theme is very blurry i think.. and it kinda loses focus.. I would make the actuall theme more upfront so u hear that it is actually that u are listening too.. try focusing the track a little bit... the violin-like thingy in the last minute is kinda cool.. |
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| R.j. |
thanks for the comments... well i'll just let the thread die out
laterz
rj / space pirate |
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| staticblue |
> i think the start is a bit aggressive for a chillout track. nice chords coming in :)
> the fx are ok but maybe they just repeat too many times.
> chords are very cute again :D
> i'm sure you could do something with the pad's EQ to make it sound even better.
> dont really like the kinda "detune" effect on the nice high pitched sound in the second part of the track.
overall, it was nice to listen, but nothing that would make me want to keep it in my playlist.
keep it up, quite nice work :) |
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