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Shadowdance - Fluorescent Moon (pg. 2)
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| State of Matter |
Thanks guys.
DJ-Kreing: Thanks, glad you liked it. About the main melody, I hadn't noticed anything so I probably won't change it. There isn't really a lead, more like a symphony of synths working together for an atmosphere. I appreciate the feedback though.
eulerfx: Yeah, I agree with most of what you said. I added more snare to the kick roll to make it a little smoother. Cleaned up some muddiness as well. I don't want the strings to sound realistic per se but I agree they could sound fuller so I'll work on that as well.
Keep em coming. ;) |
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| staticblue |
| great. beautiful and well produced. |
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| Lombardo |
| I love the style of this track . Your production and everything else is on point! I would like to hear more |
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| Massive84 |
your style is really good SoM
Like most of your tracks, screaming strings and pads, love that.
Piano sounds really lush.
Hoped for some extra melody hehe, and the sample is to short to judge it good.
Good luck :) and wish i had your composing skills :p |
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| EternalMusic |
Hey SOM,
Man. this is ing sweet. Love everything about this one! I'd like to hear more! :D
Really good work!
Antonio. |
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| M-X |
| very well produced, i love it, top marks man. :) |
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| DRM |
| really nice as always mate :) Good Production values and a very nice melody. The ambience in the breakdown is really nice and would work very well in a club environment. my own vague criticisms would be that the kick is a little "lazy", i mean it kinda plods along instead of kicking if that makes any sense and the percussion is a little quiet too. But other than that its some great work :) |
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| activa |
I really like this track, the melody is fantastic, really nice and dreamy.
I think my only criticism is that when its building up after the break the kickroll seems to take away some impact if the 4/4 kicks coming back in.
Maybe if the kickroll is slighly quieter as it builds then have the 4/4 kick a bit louder it might give it that punch that it seems to lack at that point.
Other than that a quality tune.
:) |
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| Yaz |
Awesome production mate - love the pads especially!!
Any chance of a full length for the show and out and about?
Keep em coming! :D |
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| theholyalex |
I really like this track good work!
Au contraire to what some people suggest, I think the pianos are at the right volume. Tease the listener with it, and keep it subtle. The kick sounds a little high-pitched for my liking, though. Prefer it a bit meatier, but that's preference.
Great work! |
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| State of Matter |
| Thank you all for your comments. Much appreciated. |
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