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New @ TA. Here's my music. (pg. 2)
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| EtherealSL |
the saw and melody overtop is very nice... i think the silence in teh breakdown is a little too excessive
everything comes together well, however... the saw melody in the background could use an increase in decay to sound a little more full/prevalent. sounds a little to plucky, imo.
best of luck finishing it up |
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| robiNMusic |
Jay M: Thanks for your comment's.
As you say, this track is cheesy.I know:p .
I get boored when i produce "hard-styled" music. Don't know why tho.
The "rock-guitar" has a Distortion on it, maybe it shall be loosend a bit. The second guitar line is just a simple nylon with a heavy unison.
Maybe i could make a more progressiv mix of it later on?
>>FK: Thanks. not much but still pleasing :D
caddyshack: I'll try to bring it all together better in the final mix.
6 min is a bit long for the break to kick in :) tnx for your time.
EtherealSL: The Break will be phattend up in the final mixdown. Add some chords etc.
tnx mate!
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PEAZ!/Robin
ps. keep these lovely words coming! |
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| Northtribe |
| Very nice song and very nice melodies. The saw melody reminds me a lot a song to a nintendo game. I think it reminds me of the first Sim City actually.. Anyway, a very good song and quite unique for its style. Good work! |
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| RickyM |
Hey Robin - Love what you've done with the guitars! Nice idea that could've gone wrong but you've pulled it off. Melody is pretty sweet too!
Gets the thumbs up from me! |
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| Stephenox |
| Hey, very nice! I love what you've done with this. Very uplifting sound. The melody is indeed simple-- but catchy and the harmonies you add to it make up for the simplicity. This is how simplicity of melody can shine! I too think that this track ends a bit too abruptly, and a DJ-friendly ending should be considered... Good job! |
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| midaV |
haha northtribe, exact feel I had as I listening to this track.
I felt like I was in a 3D super mario world on top of yoshi picking away at the beautiful apples while jumping in the blue sky...
Very imaginitive work you've got going here..lol
Good work!;) |
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| Leon Oziel |
| Am I a good detective or is your name Vadim? :happy2: |
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| DJ Dinz |
Nice Tune! ATM a sunrise tune, when u r drop from ur pills... :D LOL. Yeah agree not a dj friendly track.. The intro i mean :)
But a very relaxing tune!!!
Cheers! |
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| Tiérra |
now this piece is special.. :)
im a fan of happy melodies and uplifting tracks, and this track was pretty cool. when i first turned on the track and heard the guitar and saw the trackname (airforce - 1984) i thought of some remixed war-in-vietnam track or something like that, and it turned out to be that, and a mushroom-supermario-trip aswell, amazing track ;)
the break at the end is a bit to long i think, i would absolutely love it there if you had a piece with breakbeats there.. with maybe the rockguitar or something.
the piano in the end im not so happy over either, it sound to.. weird, i would like a fat sharp synth there or something, or maybe a deep synthpiano as in Lexicon 4 - Reach Me (airwave remix).
anyways.. good luck. waiting to hear the update :) |
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| Oktan |
| omg dude this tune is awesome. melody is gorgeous |
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| Gladius |
yeah, very original stuff!
cheers |
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| Samuelzone |
W00t Robin , I've never seen u this humble before haha !
Anyway , I think I've had this track for a while now or atleast parts of it . It's a nice track indeed . The break is new for me and it's wicked aswell but I know that u could have done it a bit better . Put some more atmospheric sounds in it ! U use to do that perfect !
But once again , tight track dude !
Rock 'n roll ;) |
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