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Alan-M - Intermittent - Listen and I'll give you free sex!! (pg. 3)
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by djdustx
i'd ask Dj Ampz to put it on his show
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He's going to play it at his next show. Thanks for the referral ;)
I did a more "DJ Friendly" mix of it if anyone is interested:
http://myslu.stlawu.edu/~almarc04/A...-_Intermittent_(Extended_Mix).mp3
I lost most of the original .wav forms becuase of a recent hard drive index error. So all I could really do was throw on some percs at the end since I still had those. |
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| Beijer |
Excellent work man! :D I love it! Very energetic and melodic - just the way it should be. The pianobit is sweet, and the all the lead synths are top notch!
Give me more! :whip:
Cheers |
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| seantyas |
| great work i like the spook voices in the bg, everything comes together real nice... mix seeems to sit well, and it was said that the melody lacks punch, but i thing th esmoother feel is what you were going for since it sits fine in the mix as is.... |
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| Anaconda |
hey, mate....thiss too brilliant, so i'm affraid of saying other things, the main melody is drivin me crazy. Lots of elements are perfect imho.:rolleyes: But theres a possibility to make your track into a perfect one.;) i'm seriosly....just work on capital things...this is my peronal feeling:D thx
your global melodies are epic naturalllym but sometimes i cannot find any harmonies with some synths, buta .....its kinda Ferrys one, so epic, mf!!!!!:D;) :tongue3 |
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| ZxZDeViLZxZ |
| umm that was some piss poor english to be completely honest you sounded like a crackhead rambling on. im not sure if any of that made sense.. it almosts reads like it was sent through a translator lol |
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| Subtle |
| wow.. damn this sounds really tight.. the percussions are just top notch.. the bass is cool.. production is excellent.. although i do think the filter on the lead thingie in the breakdown is a little too obvious.. and the track could be longer.. melody sounds very good.. u can really hear this comes from an hardware unit for sure;) |
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| Beijer |
| quote: | Originally posted by ZxZDeViLZxZ
umm that was some piss poor english to be completely honest you sounded like a crackhead rambling on. im not sure if any of that made sense.. it almosts reads like it was sent through a translator lol |
+1 |
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| Etherium |
Nice track. Again, not my style but I can appreciate the hard work that went into it.
1.) I like the kick, the bass is good, could be a bit more "focused"
2.) Overall arrangement is nice, something I realize isn't easy to get right.
3.) The melody just doesn't do it for me, but that's me. The earth is home to 6 billion people.
Every song you're improving. That's the most important part to take from this. In a year, you'll be signed.
Keep it up dog. |
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| josh |
| Cool! wonderful mate!!! Keep it going man!!! CHEERS!!!!!!!!! |
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| leedearn |
nice percussion!
bassline sounds good!
the first synth that comes in i dont really like, sounds too dry.
that piano sounds quality!
the melody really does come out of nowhere, perhaps a boom kick or a clash of some sort before it filters through would sound better.
the build up is good but it kicks back in to nothing, the energy is lost, pehaps if you added another synth when it kicks back in, the power would be there, just an idea like.
sounds good, not my type of trance though! |
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| Digital Aura |
Alanzo! WHOA! How'd I miss this!?
Pure CHOONage! Unbelievable melody! Just how I like 'em! No dissin' just straight props to you bro! Sweet!
Keep em comin'!:cool: |
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| pho mo |
really tight production dude, kick is great, percs spot on and the mixing is just right.
i love the way this tune builds up, first the layers upon the wicked 3-octave bassline, then in come the really nice piano + choirs.
breakdown is beautiful, leading into it with the pianos. supersaw melody coming in is obvious but i still love it. for me, when the piano was leading into the breakdown, if it had changed to incporate the key changes that the melody introduces then I probably would have broken down in tears. as it stands, it's alright but a little plain.
but damn man, all that work building up the tune and then it anti-climaxes at 3:00 when it's meant to completely rip! confusion while dancing may be good but so it going completely off your nut.
that aside, the main melody is very good, with really powerful chord changes and synths.
nice work man! |
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