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space pirate - phase one (of 2) - full - feedback? :D
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| R.j. |
download here or here
errmmm... i aint gonna explain it all:p since i might not get n e feedback at all...
all it gets better towards da end :P
k thanks:D
rj / space pirate |
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| EliPsE |
I think the clap you have going needs to be changed, sounds cheap,
That extended snare/clap that you bring it around 2:27 is gonna annoying, idk it might just be me.
Bassline you have is pretty cool.
I think a lil more variety could help before 4minutes, or introduce those elements earlier instead.
Before that breakdown part right before 5:00min could be a bit smoother instead of just abruptly stopping,
I think this part is really kick ass, just the levels are a too high and could be mixed better and brought down.
Overall i think the song is pretty kick ass.:happy2: keep it up |
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| R.j. |
| quote: | Originally posted by EliPsE
I think the clap you have going needs to be changed, sounds cheap,
That extended snare/clap that you bring it around 2:27 is gonna annoying, idk it might just be me.
Bassline you have is pretty cool.
I think a lil more variety could help before 4minutes, or introduce those elements earlier instead.
Before that breakdown part right before 5:00min could be a bit smoother instead of just abruptly stopping,
I think this part is really kick ass, just the levels are a too high and could be mixed better and brought down.
Overall i think the song is pretty kick ass.:happy2: keep it up |
y thank you :toothless
'bout the clap... hmmzzzz i dunno i tried something different instead of the one i usually use, + i wanted something DRY not all reeverbish n stuff.. oh well thanks alot :D |
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