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Oceanlab - Satellite (Project 7 Remix)
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As you probarbly know im sh1t at Production, anyway would like some comments on this where to go with it
This is abit clicky in places but that will be sorted when i master it
Oceanlab - Satellite (Project 7 Remix)
Length: 10.56
Bitrate: 160Kb/s
Size: 12.5Mb
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| tylerc |
| i hate that bass sound. your arpeggiated melody isnt in time with the kick it doesnt sound like, and its really obvious that you're using pad loops. vocals aren't even close to on tempo. clap is too loud. really there's no sense of tempo to this at all, everything it moving at its own tempo is seems like. |
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| quote: | Originally posted by tylerc
i hate that bass sound. your arpeggiated melody isnt in time with the kick it doesnt sound like, and its really obvious that you're using pad loops. vocals aren't even close to on tempo. clap is too loud. really there's no sense of tempo to this at all, everything it moving at its own tempo is seems like. |
Loop pads??
no i used z3ta+ for the pads, unless you mean i looped my own pads if so yes i did! |
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| Would like some comments on how to improve this please |
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ouch, i don't wanna be rude or something, but maybe you should go back to basics... the vocals are totally offbeat and everything sounds really amateurish... i crackles/stop/chops... and it's no structure or anything... my advise to you is to go back to basic and start to understand the basics and learn the basics behind beatkeeping etc. Another good thing is to listen to a lot of trance music so you get the understanding och song structures, melodys etc.
good luck! |
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| R.j. |
well, the bass is terrible like someone mentioned, the vocals are kinda dry, gets pretty boring, good try tho!
rj / space pirate |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
The vocals are pretty dry as mentioned above, try putting some FX to make them sound cooler, as an example try using something like Evoc or Space designer (Logic Pro).
Include memorable hooks the whole track is way to simple and gets boring after a while.
Use bars for the beats-each group of four beats is a bar
Example to improve your track-
Darude - Sandstorm
intro- 8 bars-synth pad
intro- 8 bars - synth pad/partial synth hook
main part-32 bars- beats /bass/synth pad/synth hook
breakdown- 34 bars- synth pad / partial synth hook
outro-32 bars-beats/bass/synthpad/ synth hook
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