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New Euro Trance Track plz review!!
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| kopi_luwak |
Hello,I am giving the last touches to this track and would help me a lot if you peep could help me with your feedback :D.
I am not posting the whole track to dont bore you,I am puting the important parts,I think the second part is the best,and thanks!
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| nytrox |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by nytrox
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LOL,u need to save target as buddy,right click on the link/save target as and voila! |
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| nytrox |
| The download-manager makes a .htm-file (3KB) out of it, I'll try it with IE later. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by nytrox
The download-manager makes a .htm-file (3KB) out of it, I'll try it with IE later. |
Weird,worked perfectly for me :).
Kopi =o. |
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| moeva |
I would've compressed the bassdrum further, after having removed the mids and increased the lows. I also feel that your clap is not too snappy; try layering your clap/snare samples and compress each with low thresholds, high attacks and low releases, that should give it more of a snap. The bassline is okay, nothing too wrong with it, however I'm sure you can make better one.
That melody which is introduced in 1:28 minutes into the clip, I like it's attack and releases are of high values, it's a nice sound, however maybe you can increase it's reverb and put the attack all the way down every now and then to give it a plucky sound, would give you variety of sounds from the same synth, check it out.
Another thing, try to take advantage of stereo panning, if it's done properly the overall quality would be better and it never hurts to automate an extra sound property.
Great work m8, keep it up :)
ps: what have you used to produce your tune? |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by moeva
I would've compressed the bassdrum further, after having removed the mids and increased the lows. I also feel that your clap is not too snappy; try layering your clap/snare samples and compress each with low thresholds, high attacks and low releases, that should give it more of a snap. The bassline is okay, nothing too wrong with it, however I'm sure you can make better one.
That melody which is introduced in 1:28 minutes into the clip, I like it's attack and releases are of high values, it's a nice sound, however maybe you can increase it's reverb and put the attack all the way down every now and then to give it a plucky sound, would give you variety of sounds from the same synth, check it out.
Another thing, try to take advantage of stereo panning, if it's done properly the overall quality would be better and it never hurts to automate an extra sound property.
Great work m8, keep it up :)
Hey man thanks for the feedback,very techicall,exactly what i was looking ;).
What I used,FL,for bass Ravity and vanguard layereds,the sound you liked it is ravity,the piano also is ravity,for the Fx I used vanguard heavily retouched with effects to make it sound like that.
I have not mastered yet this with a sound editor,just with the FL plugins and effects,I am giving the last touches then I will begin to play with it on soundforge ;).
Kopi =o.
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey man thanks for the feedback,very techical,exactly what i was looking for .
What I used,FL,for bass Ravity and vanguard layereds,the sound you liked it is ravity,the piano also is ravity,for the Fx I used vanguard heavily retouched with effects to make it sound like that.
I have not mastered yet this with a sound editor,just with the FL plugins and effects,I am giving the last touches then I will begin to play with it on soundforge :) .
Kopi =o. |
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| alexpea |
| You have to change the piano-melody. Where the piano is playing F all the time. Change that one to C and D some times. It's sounds so false. And all this accatck/release -talk is just waste of time. You're tune needs no adjustments in that matter. I like the slow attack on some synths here. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by alexpea
You have to change the piano-melody. Where the piano is playing F all the time. Change that one to C and D some times. It's sounds so false. And all this accatck/release -talk is just waste of time. You're tune needs no adjustments in that matter. I like the slow attack on some synths here. |
Hey thanks,yes the piano sounds kinda boring,I think I will play a bit more with it ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| doreemix |
hey! que tal!
-it's tooooo happy for me, but anyway i agree with somethings posted before, in particular the stereo thing, the clip sounds very mono (but wach out, don't abuse paning, that's bad too).
-bassline is ok, but it's kind of a weak sound, maybe you can try eq (there is some freq over-filling the track and makes the bass sound 'muddy'), or try another bass.
-kick needs a bit of volume
-drum roll (around 0:12) can be better (make it dry)
i must said: do what you think is right, you're not cooking a pie with a recipie
saludos! |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by doreemix
hey! que tal!
-it's tooooo happy for me, but anyway i agree with somethings posted before, in particular the stereo thing, the clip sounds very mono (but wach out, don't abuse paning, that's bad too).
-bassline is ok, but it's kind of a weak sound, maybe you can try eq (there is some freq over-filling the track and makes the bass sound 'muddy'), or try another bass.
-kick needs a bit of volume
-drum roll (around 0:12) can be better (make it dry)
i must said: do what you think is right, you're not cooking a pie with a recipie
saludos! |
Hey!!
Gracias paisa!que pedo,tienes alguna rola aqui para oirla wey?
Saludos!
Kopi =o. |
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