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[Trance] Cyxian - Tetraktys
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| Darkone55 |
Hi,
I've been working on this track for a while. I can't say it's finished, but it is close to finished. It needs to be mastered and it might needs some little changes.
Cyxian - Tetraktys
160kbit | 8:24 min. | 9,62 Mb
I cut the first seconds of the beginning and the last seconds of the end.
Made with
FL Studio
Vanguard
Supersaw+
and a lot more.
Tell me what you think.
Hope u enjoy! |
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| davidemonin |
| Well the link not working man!! |
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| DJ Twenty |
Track starts of good but i aint keen on the kick drum, needs a bit more punch.
EQ and that is out but thats because u aint mastered it yet :)
Synth's sounded a bit weak for vanguard? maybe need a bit more punch.
Song gets nice after the breakdown, kinda like chilled out uplifting trance.
Overall though keep the work up on it and who knows! :) |
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| Darkone55 |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ Twenty
Track starts of good but i aint keen on the kick drum, needs a bit more punch.
EQ and that is out but thats because u aint mastered it yet :)
Synth's sounded a bit weak for vanguard? maybe need a bit more punch.
Song gets nice after the breakdown, kinda like chilled out uplifting trance.
Overall though keep the work up on it and who knows! :) |
Thanks, first of all, for your reply!
The only thing I did with Vanguard are the pads. The lead synth is a software JP-8000-version. Can't get more punch in that I'm afraid. The Lead-Sine is PolyIblit.
Anyway, I changed it a bit.
What have I done exactly:
| quote: | - 2nd basstone lower.
- Bass some more depth and decay.
- Bit less compression on the kick/hihats; better climax.
- More FX, like some little snare-rolls and some little hihat FXs.
- Full new snare-roll.
- Kick a bit deeper and harder.
- Clap bit better for the climax.
- CHH on the kick little less velocity and better on the kick.
- Some more little rests, makes it less boring :P
- 2nd climax deleted.
- Chorus on that lead-sine.
- Pad little softer; better in the climax, gives it a bit more strength. |
So, I uploaded this new version. It's available under the same link. Hope you guys like it!
You think it's worth to try some labels with this track? |
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| Darkone55 |
Well, in 4 days time, I got 1 reply that helped me. Are you guys afraid of reviewing it? I don't understaind. I reviewed other people's music, so that couldn't be the problem. The server is very fast, you don't have to log in or anything.
Please.. |
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| Stino |
| i checked your stuff on clubcharts i thought ;) |
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| Darkone55 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Stino
i checked your stuff on clubcharts i thought ;) |
Yeah, you did, and thanks for that, but most people here don't go to clubcharts, and maybe I could use some help from them. :) |
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| Darkone55 |
Ok, I realy don't understand, I always give giant reviews, and I got 112 views, and just ONE review (thanks DJ Twenty!!), bit unfair maybe?
Are you all lazy people? If someone makes a good track everyone reviews it with: 'Great track' and stuff. But you are too lazy to help somebody when a track is not that good. :rolleyes: |
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| Sunclyder |
Not bad!!
I like your bassline, melo is fine, your song have clima.
Good Job!! |
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| Jay M |
Hey this is a pretty good track! (see CC)
Very relaxing m8, good work! Keep this up!
;)
-Jay |
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| Darkone55 |
Ooh, thank you guys! *blinks tear away*
I'll give the track some small improvements (also see CC) and then I will try to finish a new track! :) Dunno if it's gonna be a remix or another own track, depents on my ideas. |
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| NoisyNeil |
I like it :)
Some of the elements really remind me of Yahel productions, the bassline, ... use of percussion :) I think the kick is good the way it is and the build-up is rock solid.
Overall, a great production. Still think it's a little on the boring side, but it sure has great potential :) Maybe expand the melody with a little extra, a wider string section or something!
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