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Yarune - Fanaticism (pg. 2)
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| coldheaven |
| dont like the breaks in there, make a trance track OR a breaks track imo. sound needs a rework imo, comes a little powerless, and i can hardly hear the bassline! maybe the problem is that you used stereo spread on way too much, sound is too widespread, like the synth playing fat after the break! work on your sound dude! |
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| Icone |
This sounds really cool to me Jay, very nice work so far. Love the softer drive, synths and global feel of the track.
Percussion might be a bit on the weak side, but I like how it fits to the mood. Not too sure about the breakbeat part though, dunno if it's really needed in this one...
Carry on ;)
// Wim |
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| Sunquest |
i think as others said, make bass less unison, reverb , stereo on it
make it more in instead of out
as well as the synth, take off some unison from there, or stereo or whatever u got on it
the trance synth coming in is massive, love it
always powerful from u :-)
still needs a little clearing up, but great melody when it all hits in, sounds very asian style, i love asian trance :D :toothless
great site by the way ;) |
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| iloop |
[+]intro, drum programming, main lead melody synth, smoothness, overall production
[-] gets a bit too repetitive, takes too long for anything to happen, energy is low, no euphoric melody....
Good track overall, nothing special, but no random n00b sounds, full version would be nice. |
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| midaV |
Hey Jay nice job on this track, I dont really want to critiscize on percussion and such because to me that’s all a matter of taste and I respect what you have done.
I love the melody and how it flows..cool fx going, although the main melody does get a bit repetitive towards the end it still isnt tooo bad.
It's got a really chill ambient flow to it that would play nice on a hot summer nite with the top down cruising on the freeway going just above 110mph ;)
Nice job |
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| Jay M |
Allrighty guys, a lot of thanks for the reviews. Appreciated.
And thanks to Greenwave for playing this one out on ETN.fm. :)
Full will soon be available. |
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| Klangzentrum |
this is already really nicely done, jay!
you always have some quality tracks going on!
i´m excited about the full track! :) |
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| tylerc |
i really like the percussion in the beginning. the bassline isn't bassy enough for me. i think you maybe went a lil too far with your panning on the percs, but it may just be because i'm listening on headphones.
nice work. |
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| alexpea |
| The whole tune is boring, imo. And I recon a crappy sounding shake-sound in my left ear every time there's supposed to be a clap. |
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| pho mo |
| Beautiful stuff!! Way too much stereo, but the main melody is unbelievably good. This would make a great driving uplifting tune, but I like the more chilled vibe in this one. Really nice use of fx too, lots of nice little touches that make all the difference. |
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| Blincc |
| quote: | Originally posted by pho mo
but the main melody is unbelievably good.
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indeed ;) the whole track has a beautiful vibe :)
keep it up |
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| EternalMusic |
Jay master! u stereo freak :D
Been a while.
This sounds really good. Loved it all! Specialy the melody + breaks.
post the 192 when ur done :).
Gomez out. |
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