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New Goa Track plz review!!!!
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| kopi_luwak |
Ok,this is a Goa track I just finished,plz some feedback would be great and thanx in advance ;).
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Kopi =o |
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| Atari Addict |
| nice track it has a cool feel. effects are very clean and that piano in the middle is sweet |
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| Axolotyl |
Nice and crisp sound as Atarti Addict said. Certaily has that eastern spooky style of a good goa track. I love that wailing sound. It reminds me of some of the sounds from ghost in the shell.
The snare sounds a bit tinny even for a goa track. You got a nice piano riff at 3.03 which I think works well, you could maybe do more with it... roll it back up again or something? Theres also a bit at 4.20 where I was expecting it to really kick in with some more goa style madness, but no joy :(
Overall, a very sweet sounding track tho =) |
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| tonkproject |
| the all ideea and the bild-up quite great...try to add a new instrument to the theme....just curious:what did you used? |
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| kopi_luwak |
Atari,
Thanks man,I worked pretty much with the compressor to make it sound like that :).
Axolotyl,
Thanks man,you are right,I have to agree that second part with the outro is pretty mmm without variations,I am adding some really nice synths and working in that snare ;).
tonkproject,
Thanks bro,I used sitrus for almost all,the first lead(The one filtered),the bass,the synths you listen in the second part with sequence added,and for the whistle :),the rest are random wav FX ;).
Thnaks to all for the comments!Improved version coming soon ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| cybernetica |
The first thing I noticed was that this track sounds very "clean". If that was your intention, it's just fine, but sometimes a "washy" sound is needed. I think in your case it's just fine :) ... I think the chords at 2:30 don't seem to fit that good with the rest of the song.. But when that (great) Piano comes in they fit much better :) ... Oh, great Piano :) ... I don't think I can criticize further, this track is just  :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by cybernetica
The first thing I noticed was that this track sounds very "clean". If that was your intention, it's just fine, but sometimes a "washy" sound is needed. I think in your case it's just fine :) ... I think the chords at 2:30 don't seem to fit that good with the rest of the song.. But when that (great) Piano comes in they fit much better :) ... Oh, great Piano :) ... I don't think I can criticize further, this track is just :) |
LOL...,hey glad to see ur review here man thanks ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Anymore review? :P
Kopi =o. |
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| nic01445 |
| I kinda like the intro. Bass line = too dry and cheesy. honestly, I think this track would sound a lot better if it were less compressed, especially the percussion. Nice overall sound. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by nic01445
I kinda like the intro. Bass line = too dry and cheesy. honestly, I think this track would sound a lot better if it were less compressed, especially the percussion. Nice overall sound. |
Thanks,I work3ed specially to make ti sound that way over compressed :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| alexpea |
| The intro is kinda boring, imo. And the bassline is strange. Yet, it's kinda cool. Funky. And I don't understand WHY you want a song to sound overcompressed, heh |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by dj_palm
very nice tune with good productions. but the kick together with baseline is a bit too early 90s i think. and i think u need some more percusion so it gets more energetic. very nice melodies and athmospere. my favorit synth here is the one i think goes through the whole tune but its alone between 3:25 and 3:38 thats my favorit sound of the tune its so dreamy and sweet. I agree to wath someone else said that it should have been some kind of "takeoff" at 4:22 its a bit of anticlimax(or whatever its called) there!!
anyhow a very comfortable tune to listen to when u have a bad hangover :cool: and wants to dream away and forget what u did thw last day, hehe |
Thanks fella ;).
Kopi =o. |
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