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"Biosphere" my new trippy&dreamy Goa Trance Track
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| cybernetica |
Hi,
the title does say it all ... "Biosphere" is probably my most dreamy track so far. Now I really need to know your opinion, if this one is too boring or if you like its atmosphere and structure :)
Length: 10:10 min
Size: ~14MB
Bitrate: 192kbps
Equipment: Fruity Loops 4, Spectrasonics Atmosphere, Audiorealism Bassline, ReFX Vanguard, Linplug Albino
>> Download Cybernetika - Biosphere <<
Enjoy, and give me your feedback on this one please! :) |
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| Daniel.Neumann |
hey m8
great track, nice chilling. not on the hard side.
You could work a little on the kick, its not punchy enough. sound hollow
maybe try some pulsing rolling bass instead, the bassline sound a little boring
it sound nice, be i think i would be nicer if you also mixed this with some darker elements
but good job, i would love to hear more from you
daniel |
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| nic01445 |
| Honestly, I think that compared to your other stuff this track is kind of lame. To me, it seemed like 10:10 of the same thing. I like the elements, but there is really very little variation. |
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| Axolotyl |
Listening now...
I love that goa synth you got at the start.
Buildup at 2.00 is a bit of a let down.
The synth you bring in at 2.25 kinda needs er... something not too sure. Feels to arpeggiated compared to the squelchy bass underneath it.
Buildup at 3.03 is better but I'm still wanting more
5.40... yes nice, all makes sense now ;)
6.05.... what happened, I was just getting into it??
8.30... nice change of lead for the outro
Really nice track, I enjoyed it a lot. Reminds me of Etnica or Pleadians style of goa. The beat and bassline is rockin but I think the leads could do with some more tweaking to give them that same liquid feel, especially at the start of the track. Also the track is very up and down with lots of buildups which i know is very goa in style but I think the one at 5.40 is the best and really could be the highpoint for the song if you drag it out some more. |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Comments as I listen:
-Nice dreamy intro, love the pad work and effects there.
-I feel like the bassline could use some more work, it’s a bit too basic the way it is now. Should be more driving and pumping I think, like try adding another layer and giving it more space in the mix.
-The kick should be stronger I think, more dominating in the mix.
-To may taste, there isn’t really enough variation here, same acid line and percussion comes in after every break. Try adding some more different sounds and effects I guess.
Overall this tune is quite decent, got a nice trippy atmosphere to it, but still needs some more work. |
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| Barachem |
Good production.
There are two waqys this track could have worked out better.
1. Making it more chill.
2. Making it more energetic.
But now it is uncomfortably inbetween.
On the other hand i find it very repetetive like much German goa.
And the lead should have more melody to steer the track, but now it's adrift on a sea of chords.
I have to give this one 65 out of 100 points.
It's reasonable, but more work is required. |
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| The Drow |
sorry to tell you but its boring and not so exciting.
the bass is not good.
the melodies are ok but they dont have power.
it's too long imo.
2/5
Omer Katz (aka The Darkone) |
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| cybernetica |
| There's a lot of valuable comments in here :) ... I really appreciate your feedback, and of course your constructive criticism, too :) Thanks! |
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