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[prog-house/trance] Seneca - State Of Mind
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all feedback taken, good or bad.

Thanks in advance for listening.

**EDIT**

track has been revised with new intro, kick and some efx.
sooper
Hey Seneca,

I'm always up for some prog! I'll download this when I get home from work tonight, and post a review at that time.

Trevor
sooper
OK,

this has a great fun funky vibe to it.
I'm getting a bit of distortion on the kick though...
I like the vocal sample.
Great percs after the break!

Great tune over all.. looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor
SENECA
hey thanks for listening and providing some input.

The kick is an electro sample and I'm actually thinking of changing it to a less distorted kind.
Massive84
yes nice bass! grovy :)

However the kick i really band.

the perc sound a bit dry, whole mix is, like there is no EQ used or something, i don't know how to explain it.

vocal is cool

intro needs more sfx sounds or variation.

that raw acid sounds nice, but once again i find it a bit dry or something.

Tune needs some more variation, and maybe some better mixing, definitely needs a better kick.

thats all :)
SENECA
quote:
Originally posted by Massive84
yes nice bass! grovy :)

However the kick i really band.

the perc sound a bit dry, whole mix is, like there is no EQ used or something, i don't know how to explain it.

vocal is cool

intro needs more sfx sounds or variation.

that raw acid sounds nice, but once again i find it a bit dry or something.

Tune needs some more variation, and maybe some better mixing, definitely needs a better kick.

thats all :)


thanks for your input... I have since revised the track. Looks like it will be finished next week... i have no time. Please give it another shot though.
Subtle
listening:

it starts out very messy and not as smooth as I might enjoy.. good bass sound, the idea sounds good.. but i dont like the hats.. they seem to "obvious" and not very subtle.. still it changes after about 1:00 which is good.. very good vocals.. the track is getting better from every bar after 1:00.. i do like the kick.. and the bass very much..

really like this very much.. but i need to change the intro /first minute of the track.. loving the bass and kick

good work

8/10
eulerfx
- like said, its a bit rough at first
- that syncopated tom you should perhaps change to a more unique and softer sounding perc like a conga
- the groove, one it gets going, is pretty cool, but i wanted to hear a snare in there
- the break at 2:30 needs a pad or strings, at least very subtle ones
- add slight reeverb to some of your percs and play with stereo modulation
- overall the track seems to build toward something, but never gets there, i think strings and pads could help with that
- bassline sounds awesome on a good nice
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