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Cyberwing - Harmony
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| Cyberwing |
Here is my last finished song. Some little thing still need change, but feel free to listen.
And please, I would like feedback or suggestion !
Tx in advance,
http://music.cybercreation.ca/ |
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| Darkness_Hero |
| the link take me to a page but there i just can see your track is portected but cant listen the tracki :( |
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| Cyberwing |
| Is anybody able to listen to it? All work fine from my side ! |
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| Axolotyl |
Yeah, can dl it no problem...
Nice start. That kick and hihat go perfectly together.
Melody at 0.58 is very beautiful. This is euphoric sort of stuff.
Only comment would be that I'm wanting more... the track has room to go up a notch after the breakdown but then again part of this tracks beauty is its mellow simplicity.
But yeah... chilled goa style trance, very good. |
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| iloop |
intro - a bit plain
bassline- not really doing it for me
1st break/melody - sweet, i like it
hi-hat- too powerfully mixed in the track- stands out more than melody
strings- not bad but could use some mid/hi range boost.
arrangement - simple yet flowing
2nd break.... expecting more but its just the first melody coming back.
Overall: not bad, but you need, builds, fx, mastering, 2nd melody, better bass. seems a little boring to me, but hey thats just one opinion...
Keep at it and i'm sure your quality will drasticaly improve. |
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