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Hey guys could i get some feedback on a tune
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| fr0st |
As some of you know i started doing production in august of last year.... And this is my latest offering i need to do more sound design to fill up the tune but this is 2min worth... Im using vocal samples from a dfuse tune, which the name escapes me atm....
http://www.frozen-web.com/samples/xpanded.mp3
be as harsh as you want just dont be a dick about it lol.... |
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| Highmay |
| the hell happened to MY song?? |
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| fr0st |
| quote: | Originally posted by Highmay
the hell happened to MY song?? |
well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself.
Me smash high....
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| AstralNrg |
use a better kick sample it sounds so muddy here, work on adding more percussion and effects maybe add a pad or some atmospheric stuff, its too minimal right now. The structure of the hihats are sloppy for some reason it sounds wrong. Otherwise good work, keep working at it. I like the vocals , is there any cahnce u can send it to me ?
peace,
Jay |
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| Mike Vicious |
| Thats decent, good job |
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| beema |
it's ok, not really my kind of music
I need a longer sample to judge ;) |
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| Highmay |
| quote: | Originally posted by fr0st
well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself.
Me smash high....
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pathetic...guess you just dont have heart... |
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| Yan |
Unfortunately, I don't know TOO many technical terms so my advice can help to an extent.
Vocals are great. The drumbeat that comes in around the :30 mark sounds great during the vocal part and during the short intervals between the vocals... but when there is a prolonged time between the vocals, such as at 1:30, it gets a bit annoying.
Otherwise, it's definitely a great start for a potentially awesome tune. |
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| vtec junkie |
| quote: | Originally posted by beema
I need a longer sample to judge ;) |
ditto |
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| TiTi |
| Only thing I can say is, it's too repetitive. Don't know how else to put it. :conf: |
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| Highmay |
| its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions... |
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| DJ_Lord |
| quote: | Originally posted by Highmay
its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions... |
done by axl rose. |
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