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Trancevisions presents "Lazarus Atmosphere"
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| Trancevision |
it's been a long time since I presented my last track.
The track I want to show you today is made totally in Reason.
When I get my my new PC and my monitors I plan to rework it.
Just tell me how you like it and what could be improved...
Download here
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| kopi_luwak |
Very good intro,pretty hard,but the track itself it's pretty comercial imo and monotone.At 2:40 you get the best part of the Track,those choirs sounds kinda Jean Michell Jarre I like them a lot,at 3:40 I was expecting a bit more of energy.I cannot tell you about the mastering because I am using my pc speakers at work but in overall is nice done and is a good work but not my style ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Trancevision |
thanks for your feedback
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| expanded |
Yay! This track deserves more attention, so all hardheadz listen to it! It got potential, i'm not into this kind of style. But it's a nice track overall... but it lacks good mastering and you can really hear that it's reason made :S
Re do it in another sequencer and put some better effects on it and you'll probably get it out? Sounds like listening to a 96kbps although it was a 192kbps :P |
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| Icone |
Pretty wicked trancetune, long time since I heard anything like it. Has a good overall feeling to it. Although I agree that the sound quality leaves a little bit to be desired...
Cheers,
Wim |
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| Stu Cox |
i quite like the ideas and the way you've put it together, although i agree that it doesn't sound very high quality.
the leads sounded a bit thin and a bit too toppy, which i think is almost sticking a layer of white noise over the track... might be worth looking at the eq, maybe filter it down slightly and try and bring out some of the more mid-range frequencies
considering the hard sound of the track, the kick doesn't quite punch through enough - seems to be lacking bass and general power
sorry, this sounds like more of a slating than it should - you've got a lot of nice ideas in there and i wouldn't give up on this one, just needs a bit of fine tuning to give it the full sound it requires :) |
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| Stino |
| I really like the way you move this track and let it make progression. Im listening to the "listen" link and the sound quality is extremley bad. Nonetheless, the drive and your sounds are wicked. A lot of energy. That crowd sample is cheeze if you ask me, you should leave that away. Melodie couldnt grab me either. The intro is the best part. |
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| TOR |
i agree about the sound quality. still an awesome track, though. you always manage to create a unique and warm sound, and to write gorgeous melody lines.
good job! |
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| Trancevision |
thanks for all your comments.
Some more information about the track:
I made it in 2002 with one of the first Reason versions.
No changes have been made since 2002, I just wanted to present you
one of my unfinished classics :gsmile:
When my PC is upgraded I am going to rebuild it: with Cubase and some hardware sound from my synth :D
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