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[Breaks]Mane - Frozen Wind
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Mane
hello
here is my newest track, its a bit different from my usual stuff ;) its breaks on 128 bpm, would love to hear some feedbacks about it :)

http://www.sitesled.com/members/man...wind%20clip.mp3

greetings

Lukas
vince_geneva
Nice chillout track. Good quality. I would like to hear a longer sample or even the full track to see if you introduce other sounds and how it develops.
Klangzentrum
hey lukas!

this is again some quality-mane-stuff! i like the laidback atmosphere in this one...very relaxing tune...
perhaps you could add some more percs...

i´m waiting for the full track! ;)
EtherealSL
i'm big fan of breaks

i'm not liking the kick pattersn in this track... not too dance friendly i don't think. the kicks do not have enough of a pattern imo

nice atmosphere throughout the song... the synth introduced in the second party of the song that fades in seems to have too many hi's to it... piano is a great touch, keep it up (i actually have a breakbeat track coming up soon, watch for that one)
Mane
thx a lot for feedbacks, i will change kick and paterns of breakbeat :), anyone else???
DickieThijssen
this rules, so much atmosphere it really takes me to another world, this would be nice for a set opener, good stuff m8. The power of this track made me decide to create a breaks song myself, you gave me lots of inspiration, tnx. Imo creating atmospheres is so much cooler and more effictive with breakbeats than with regular trance..
Massive84
Man nice kick!, i enjoy breaks with hard pumching kicks ( i call them "mighty" braeks)

That second synth is indeed very nice, but not dreamy enough yet, has to much highs agrees.

piano is nice also, but also not good in the mix, sounds a tiny bit to soft

That sine? stab i hear in the begin, do more with it, it has a nice sound.

Maybe a better bass will give this more rythem.

you need some extra original perc in the loop also imo, i only hear closed hats.

Thats all :)
Mane
DickieThijssen:its really nice to hear something like that, i am glad you were inspared by my track, i would like to hear it when you done;) good luck :)

Massive84: thx a lot for rewiev, yeah i agree that piano sounds too softy will try to find some better sounds for it, and yeah heh percusion is very empty i have to add more elements.
staticblue
nice chilly atmosphere in this one :) breakbeats are pretty good and the strings sound a bit thin IMO. cute melodies once again. It's not PURE beautiful but very cute nevertheless !

quote:
Maybe a better bass will give this more rythem.


true, i'd change the bassline to set a better groove following the breakbeat.

nice stuff indeed!

static blue
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