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my Thrillseekers inspired track (pg. 2)
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| dbl |
sounds nice.. i'm not listening on any good speakers right now really...
i think that the bass could need some more power thou
and maybe work some more on the percussions
but nice work m8 :) |
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| Reconceal |
I like this high heavily delayed synth. Sounds special, and adds to the athmosphere. Pluck works very well indeed.
I kind of miss any bass :conf: I mean its there, but not really.
Make it louder, and add a second auxilary one over it to make it audible. A bit more drive from it won't hurt.
Percussion ain't that good either. Misses a bit of a groove and/or some more elements (or these are drown in the mix).
I miss something masssive in break :( I'd go for opening up a filter on those pluck synth a bit. OR using another synth with notes of the hight pitched one. All I know tho is I REALLY don't like this synth that comes in in the climax. Overly simple and too much onbeat in the contrast with previous stuff IMO.
High potential in this stuff if taken care of properlly ;) |
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| Amfora |
| Nice work Pete, i like the beginning with al those synths. The breaks @ 3.03 are ok, maybe some more percusion there. imo the bass line is ok, then the synth @ 4.02. i think its a little to loud, and the sound of that synth need more power imo, (maybe its better to use a more sawy lead). Like this track but it need some work. |
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| Reconceal |
| I took some liberty in squishing it thru some FX (multiband compressor ;) ). The percussion are nice , but inaudible normaly. Make other stuff beside open hihat stand out more. |
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| kewlness |
there is only one thing i have to gripe about.. which is the mixing
all the elements fit in well together...
but the elements are clashing against each other, and it would help tremendously if you EQ'ed each component seperately and gave them their own place in their own headroom... kick and bass needs to be a bit tighter as well...
other than that, great uplifting stuff... not totally my kind of trance but quality stuff nevertheless |
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| BrownTA4Life |
hey pete
awasome track
keep up the great work
looking forward to a vocal version
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| gerrycueto |
| Reminds me of Elevation more than Thrillseekers, but still good tune... I'm sure a lot of big name DJs will can this one once it's finished. |
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| The Drow |
Wow I like this, I really do.
I think you should improve the precs and the kick.
The bassline is really weak.
The melodies and the sounds are awsome.
Really great.
I can't wait for the full. |
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| krivi |
| awesome man! i am impressed with this.melodies are great maybe one more melody in break would be fine...this is great stuff man! |
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| Mycron |
i know bassline and percussion needs tweaking, i will fix them soon,
thanks guys, for the comments, really appreciate it:)
anyone else? |
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| DjCommisad |
| quote: | Originally posted by Luke Terry
the track is very nice, but the kick/percs/bassline are really lacking and spoil the composition
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I also was thrown off by the melody of the first 4 seconds, sounded weird, but by 14 seconds was fine. Pay attention to the strength of each of the melodies and submelodies and make sure there isn't too much conflict in each area (a lot of work I know, but it will pay off as this is a potentially superb track Pete).
And stop kicking yourself mate. This is great stuff. |
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| davidemonin |
Hey Pete. Nice melodic ideas once again, but yea, mixing/mastering needs more work, and yea i also have to agree that it could use a punchier kick and better bassline. OUHHH, yea i really like that breack down, great melodies, but the sound quality needs work still. Sounds like there is some distortion in this.
Anyways keep workin on it, this could be an awesome tune!!
:) |
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