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System F vs Armin Van Buuren - Exhale (jasonf remix)
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| dj jasonF |
HERE
128 download and streaming. its not finished but a review would be nice :D
jasonf |
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| EtherealSL |
i'm such a HUGE fan of the original song... what an amazing lead
...listening now.
percussion needs work, it's almost drowning the kick out... bass needs to be stronger. bass needs to be made an octave higher. i can barely even make out the different bass notes. add some submelodies or pads to fill this track out, sounds a little empty. |
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| dj jasonF |
yea perc needs some work. the bass is strong enough and the notes doesnt change... only during the lead there is a progression to the bass. there are pads... lots of them (different ones too)
if you hear the 320kbps version its really better.. i dont know why but the volume levels changed when i did the mp3. and the reverb on the hi-hats sounds like in the 128 version... ill prob make some changes and update.
thnx for the comments keep them coming. |
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| staticblue |
pretty nice stuff man !
..except that ridiculous clap :D. I hate it, it sounds like a pimp hitting is head against a wall. please change the clap ;)
i think the percussion work is very nice, and i'd say your synthwork needs more attention and layers.
static blue |
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| djfred500 |
arranged it well but the clap that can be changed its too dry and boring take a look @ the compression settings again sounds too low
but overall good job |
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| DJ Twenty |
Big fan of the original.
Kick Drum needs to be made more 'prominent' in the mix, can't make it out after the buildup in the middle of the tune, percussion seems to drown it out.
Synths needs some more layers, better mastering would help this too.
Good mix though, sounds very promising. |
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| dj jasonF |
dont try to be nice just be honest... my clap is the only thing i actually like... all the other stuff... i dunno needs lots of work witch i cant do with 512 ram... my pc started crashing... plus i dunno why but the perc ed up when i encoded the 128kbit version.
anyways thanx for the feedback ill probably work some more on this but without enough ram its just pissing me off...
jasonf :D
and lol @ | quote: | | hate it, it sounds like a pimp hitting is head against a wall. please change the clap |
man im coming to france tomorrow... youll teach me how to produce right :D :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :toothless |
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