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New Track - Please Review and Add Your Comments!
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| Carbon |
Well ive finally managed to get one done after MONTHS of tinkering...so here is is. Let me know what you all think, etc, etc...
Chris Carbon - Resurgance
Thanks...
-Chris |
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| MessiahProject |
Hi Chris , its a bit of a pain getting to your track via your link - it sends you to your page on Soundclick, then you have to register before it will let you listen, which I cant be bothered to do!! Did you mean to hyperlink straight to your Mp3 file? Might be better to edit the link or people wont listen.
MP |
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| Carbon |
Wow..no comments?
No "It sucked hard, please burn your computer" or "damn that was the greatest song ever, im going to give you a few thousand dollars to have it pressed"?
Nothing? Nada? Nilch? |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Listening ... Intro is housy =P, those reverses are well dones, I like 3:47, the main lead there is soft, at 4:14 lacks alot into that progression, you need more support synths and melodys than just that main lead, some pads in the background, kick/crash/delay etc, and then you jump to 5:44 and what should be the climax of the track lacks alot of energy also man.
In overall, the stracture is not bad, you have the basic idea, you just need to work it more, adding more synths, drums and making clear each part of the track, because right now all is pretty much the same, some more work on it and this could be an amazing track man keep it up mate ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| MessiahProject |
Just listening now- and have to agree with everything Kopi says - that break is far too weak - and it goes on forever! The break is nearly 2 minutes long itself, people would leave the floor, go get a drink,nip to the toilet, and still get back before the break ends! The main bit at 5:33 lacks energy - the bass is very weak, mabe you need some more low strings to add a bit of meat to it.
Once it gets going, it seems to repeat itself too much, with no variation - just the main synth over and over and over again just to fill out the track.
On the positive side though I like the melody, and some nice use of reverse crashes!!
Mp |
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| Tech0rz |
listening...
could use pads or a bassline from the start, just anything to liven it up, and add a bit of variation.
Everything seems a bit quiet. bassline, kick and crash need to stand out more.
Again, i can barely hear the break. It's quiet for far too long. just an idea but having it half as long, and make it come in suddenly with the same synth, but alot stronger, this will give a nice contrast. Its good to play with the volumes instead of just everything being the same volume all the way thru.
Don't get me wrong, i think you need work on only one or 2 areas, 1 of them being volume. Also, do you know anything about compression?
I think you have alot of potential just need to add ENERGY to your tracks, and learn how to use suspense and tension to keep your listener interested. |
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| iloop |
i dont think people know how to use the hi/low stream feature on this site for soundclick...
regardless, my review: i like the intro, track sounds muddy, clap suits the track though seems a bit loud in the mix, i like the instrumentation and im just about to get to the break...the break is loong indeed- if you had something super interesting and unique in there it might have been nice- some suspance before the main melody comes in. The main melody is good and trancy, but nothing new... I like the motion of the bassline... It didnt suck hard, but i wont be giving you any money either... keep up the produce and unique enginuity is sure to follow. work on mastering... |
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