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Melodic Trance Track Finally Finished!!
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| kopi_luwak |
Hello there,
This is my latest track, hope you like and if not I would apreciate your critics, thanks in advance ;).
Click Here
Kopi =o. |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Sounds good but the entire track, mmm, bit thin. Not sure how else to describe it. I'll see about doing some mastering work on it but I do like it :). Good instrument choices, jsut needs some work.
Cheers,
Zac |
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| futurefoton929 |
Hey, great track man! Here's my opinion on this.
1) at around 25 seconds mark, you have the claps playing every other beat. i would add 1 more clap (3 per measure) to make it seem more exciting.
2) the sound that enters at 1:20 mark is good.
3) I don't like the chirping sound at 1:50 mark. However, I really like that synth sound that accompany the chirping sound.
4) I don't like the bongos sound at 2:15 mark. It's not a bad sound, but sound "somewhat" weak introducing a massive theme.
Overall, very pleasing. Keep up the good work. |
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| Darkness_Hero |
futurefoton929,
Good point about the claps :).
IDarkISwordI,
Thanks :).
Thanks guys for the constructive critique ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by Darkness_Hero
futurefoton929,
Good point about the claps :).
IDarkISwordI,
Thanks :).
Thanks guys for the constructive critique ;).
Kopi =o. |
Hahahaha that was supossed to be me, damn I forgot to log out from my bro account :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| Sunquest |
very happy melody :D
sounds sooo good with the armin plug in for winamp :D im HOOKED on that thing
sometimes theres too much delay on that piano, the notes clash into eachother, also clap needs to be better, kick should be thicker and stronger, i love the bass notes, very old style
u got lots of good elements in here, i quite like this, very relaxing, soothing, something to clean my ears out hehe
7.954/10 on my Sunmeter :cool: |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
very happy melody :D
sounds sooo good with the armin plug in for winamp :D im HOOKED on that thing
sometimes theres too much delay on that piano, the notes clash into eachother, also clap needs to be better, kick should be thicker and stronger, i love the bass notes, very old style
u got lots of good elements in here, i quite like this, very relaxing, soothing, something to clean my ears out hehe
7.954/10 on my Sunmeter :cool: |
HAHAHAHA sunmeter!!LOL ... Thanks mate for the constructive critique :).
Kopi =o. |
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| kopi_luwak |
With your permission (or not :P), I am bringing my board alive again :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| trancinchink |
hey... this sounds really nice...
the one thing i don't really like is the bassline.... i dunno just doesn't appeal to me too much. but i like all your other elements... you use the synths nicely.. with the melodies coming in and building strongly..
another thing i didn't really like is your clap.. but thats just personal preference again..
nice work...
p.s. feel free to check out my track in this forum Hydro - Morning haze.. hehe. just wanting some feedback.. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by trancinchink
hey... this sounds really nice...
the one thing i don't really like is the bassline.... i dunno just doesn't appeal to me too much. but i like all your other elements... you use the synths nicely.. with the melodies coming in and building strongly..
another thing i didn't really like is your clap.. but thats just personal preference again..
nice work...
p.s. feel free to check out my track in this forum Hydro - Morning haze.. hehe. just wanting some feedback.. |
Thanks for the constructive feedback man, I already reviewed you :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| cybernetica |
Hey Kopi!
First of all, cool track. Sounds well produced as always!
Think the clap has a bit too much reverb (or you could try making the reverb less noisy).
This is a great summer melody :) .. Usually I'm not so much a fan of happy trance, but this is just great.
The saw-pad is too loud if you ask me, surpresses the arpeggiated synth. Great melody at 3:19, very dreamy. Makes me miss the summer (yes, here it's still zero degrees :| )
Super great layering! Cool piano part... getting really nice towards the end... Production, like I said, is just great, except maybe that the pad sounds a bit noisy and a bit too dominant... maybe.
Great one, keep it up! |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by cybernetica
Hey Kopi!
First of all, cool track. Sounds well produced as always!
Think the clap has a bit too much reverb (or you could try making the reverb less noisy).
This is a great summer melody :) .. Usually I'm not so much a fan of happy trance, but this is just great.
The saw-pad is too loud if you ask me, surpresses the arpeggiated synth. Great melody at 3:19, very dreamy. Makes me miss the summer (yes, here it's still zero degrees :| )
Super great layering! Cool piano part... getting really nice towards the end... Production, like I said, is just great, except maybe that the pad sounds a bit noisy and a bit too dominant... maybe.
Great one, keep it up! |
Cyber!
Thanks for the constructive critique and the support broda !
Kopi =o.:stongue: |
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