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Surrogate Saviour - Radiance (Yarune Remix)
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| iloop |
peak, sounds good dude- i like the bassline very smooth, xylophone sounding synth is very sweet, i'm starting to use xylos more and more. I like how you bring the main synth/melody in- very proper fx. also needs more build elements here and there unless your going for a mellow feel.
PS. Feedback makes me happy too :) |
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| Axolotyl |
Quality stuff mate =)
All the elements are balanced nicely. EQign is pretty good.
Love the filtered synth at 1.32. Buildup at 2.50 is quite restrained but it works well. You could take it a bit harder but maybe thats not the style your going for.
The track has a MIKE'ish sort of feel to it. Quite sparse but with some very powerful, subtle elements to it. |
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| Dj Radman |
nice stuff mate, nothing I can really comment on to make improvements as it is surpased my skills, only dislike I have to point out is the kick, it seems a little weak, could be because of the bitrate, but it sounds a little weak, I have the same problem when I'm not doing hard trance, I sugest trying raising the midranges slightly, dunno if it'll work, but it's worth a try :P
peace |
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| Jay M |
| Thanks for the feedback, guys! |
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| djrenco |
| Really like it mate:) can't wait to hear the full version! :p |
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| State of Matter |
Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine ;)
A+ work. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by State of Matter
Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine ;)
A+ work. |
Same here, great work :).
Kopi =o. |
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| Jay M |
Yo, thanks guys, for the kind words!
@ State Of Matter: Did you receive my PM btw, I sent you the full of course..
Anyone else?
Chrs.
-Jay |
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| State of Matter |
Yeah Jay, I got it. Wasnt aware you had sent the full though, I'll check it out again.
The link thing is no problem, I just gotta finally get around to updating the page itself. I'll do it later today. |
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| Massive84 |
I don't like the first lead synth jay. It's to weak and noobish if i may say.
Gate on the background is nice.
i REALLY don't feel any drive, where is the huge bass? something like horizon?
i miss some emotion in the break jay.
Climax is good, but still no bass :(.
Imo fix the bass and first lead synth, this is quite good, just not good enough yet. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Yeh, that first lead must be changed. Now. I'm expecting that it's just filler for now. It better be.
The percussive, flute-like synth is nice, though.
Eh, the breakdown is kinda flat. Spice it up with some high end percs or something. Hats, Bongos, anything.
I like it. Once you fix that lead and put some energy in the breakdown, though, I'll like it even more. ;) |
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