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| Energy 87 |
This is very nice!
I like your piano melody. ;)
All the melodies fits well to the track.
Very well produced. :)
Keep up the good work.
Cheers, Gabe :) |
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| AudioGuru |
Great track, I'd definently spin this one
pretty much nothing to complain about from me.
maybe leave some kinda percussion in the outro, for mixing sake. that might make it sound better while being mixed.
keep up the good work! |
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| seawinde |
| Wow i like the tune , keep it up wish to hear more from u |
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| Axolotyl |
Hey,
Sound at 1.20 is beautiful, farkin epic stuff... What did you use to get that sound? I'm after something very similar for the track I'm working on.
The dry filtered digital elements in the background work very well. A very strong contrast and a case where something sounding digital works very well.
Dont really like the piano riff. I think it makes the track sound a bit cheesy, but thats just personal taste I guess.
The percs are a bit weak in imho. You could really beef up the kick and I think the clap/snare could be turned up a notch too.
Overall a very strong driving trancer with a fresh kind of sound to it. I really like it =) |
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| staticblue |
hi mate,
pretty nice work.
i wasn't very impressed about the main synth chords, i think they are very very basic, and boring. it's the most basic chord sequence used thousands of times in dance tracks and to me those chords sound really cheesy.
the piano and other synths are very cute tho, and the bass is sounding good here !
you have some nice energy in the track, it still needs some mixing work tho.
peace
staticblue |
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| Rayan |
hi mate!!! How are yo?
Well I know... The chords are very typical.. But It was my way of making this tune.. a little Art-Fridom you know:disbelief
The song is a very typical-cheesy song. And i know I got alot of mixing to do with this tune. but I dont ahve the time to realy finnish them. To bad:eyespop: |
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| Rayan |
Axolotyl: you where talking about an epic sound at the 01:20. did you meean the lead who I use the filter (cut-off) on? And the drums behind are "pauks"...
yea! the dry filtered digital sound are cool. used some time to make it though..
the thing with this song is that I wanted to add Vocals on it. girl vocal.. I think that would be nice.. I will do that later :) |
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| PDM |
The chords are typical but well implemented, the piano sounds are beautiful, a bit repetitive, but is forgivable since is not a 10 minutes song ;).
Good Job. |
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| Rayan |
PDM: thanks for a great review :)
hehe.. the piano did I make on a accident. I did just play something. and the record was on :P
but it was cool! |
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| Digital Aura |
I actually like the piano...its organic enough to take the edge of that harsh saw synth.
Great tune and well constructed!
Keep at it!:cool: |
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