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[Trance] Romi - Dawn of Time (complete!)
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| Romi |
Hi here,
This is my newest i'm working on. It's a rough mix of 'Dawn of Time'. I think it sounds really nice, but i think it needs some work. Tell me what you think about it, and maybe you have some tips to make it better. Tomorrow i will work on it again, so any input now would be great. -Romi
update : new version is now up!
Link to track : http://www.sitesled.com/members/rom...20of%20Time.MP3 |
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| AudioGuru |
I love the ambience
good breakdown
if I were making it, I'd make the part after the long breakdown have a little more energy, so the song kinda takes you somewhere farther than where you were in the beginning of the song.
keep up the good work! |
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| Romi |
| Thanks AudioGuru, i will use your input tomorrow, when i work on it further. |
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| 1mason11 |
fantastic break man.but i think the kick comes in too aprupt.i would make a raise before the kick comes in, so there is more power and climax in it.can become a top notch track i think.:)
Riialto024 |
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| Romi |
| Thanks 1mason11, i will keep that in mind. (i will pm you later about the mp3 for my other track Technological Mind). I'm glad you liked this one so far. |
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| pho mo |
Sounds really good, beautiful stuff really!
I found the noiseiness of the synths a little irritating, could just be my sensitive ears :(
Everything else is sweet, really nice ambience and mood. Good , sherlock! |
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| Timothy |
| Indeed, the noise in the lead synth is a bit irritating ( EQ?? ). Make it more predictable when the kick comes at break with a swoosh/sweep or drum roll. Nice work m8. |
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| Romi |
| Thanks for the tips guys. I'm gonna work on it later today and i will keep your suggestions in mind. The overall mix could indeed be a bit better. Thanks again:) |
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| Romi |
| Ok, i've worked on it some more and i am now quite happy with it. :) Tell me what you think. Same link btw. |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Wow. Yes mate, keep producing tracks and check your email ;). Awesome tune and I mean tune not song if you know the difference :P.
Cheers,
Zac |
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| thoughtlessjex |
You could use some more sound effects in the intro. Once 0:25 rolls around, you can leave them, but it would be nice to have some ambience there in the beginning.
Awesome bassline. Very groovy.
The kick fill before 4:00 is throwing me off. Dunno if that was intentional or not.
In general, a very chilled track. Good for some easy listening. |
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