| nephilim |
commenting as i listen to the tune. very nice kick, mate. cool percussions, as well. i do *not* like that hi-hat or whatever it is that's sounding in the background (comes in at the same time as the open hi-hat), please get rid of it :) increase the bassline a tad in volume. and you could make the stereo image of the percussions narrower. add some pads to the break and make it a minute or two longer. as for the melody, it's ok. 5/10 overall, i'd say. hopefully you won't kick my ass for criticising your tune :stongue:
then again, i never tell a painter how his paintings should look :) keep up the work, mate! good things will come in the end! |
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