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[prog trance] Syntagma vs. Pjotr G - Hold On
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| Zombie0729 |
love the fx on the percussion, almost a soft tribal feel. i don't think your transitions into your pads/strings is very well done, it almost sounds out of key to me.
the 1st breakdown is cool, some good automation with added bassline on the last part in the bar makes it sound full. the guitar is def. out of tune lol, i think less effects on it would be better. Infact, lets get rid of this specific guitar and get rid of the automation. Maybe put in some more pads.
i dunno overall, from a DJ's perspective the song doesn't go anywhere... infact the 1st build was more prolific than the 2nd.
from a producers ear the song has some cool ideas but i still dont think you guys had a direction for the song. |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Ok, well I really am liking the idea of this song. Several things that can be changed is maybe a thicker bassline, a little stronger lead, maybe not so much chorusing on the girl, instead, more reverb. I'd really be interested in helping to make this track a little more trancey. If you are interested in having me help you or want to talk busniess (I'd like to do both actually lol), drop me a line at [email protected].
Cheers,
Zac |
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| DJ_TonKs |
| yes a little work on the bassline could be good , but i like your song, and i think i will play it on my next ETN show ^^ |
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| DjCommisad |
omg new syntagma (vs pjotr g!!)
bout time John.
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| Pjotr G |
| hehe hold the downloads, a revised version is coming up |
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| dj dimwit |
| quote: | Originally posted by DjCommisad
omg new syntagma (vs pjotr g!!)
bout time John.
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| IDarkISwordI |
Still loving it dude :). Keep it up.
Cheers,
Zac |
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| dj dimwit |
| quote: | Originally posted by IDarkISwordI
Still loving it dude |
dudes :happy2: |
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| Axolotyl |
Theres been a few good prog tracks on this site lately. I think I'm slowly starting to loose my blind, ignorant hatred for progressive trance ;)
Starts off pretty slowly, almost housey. Vocals are nice.
The melody you weave in at 2.01 is very nice. Beautiful stuff indeed.
Guitar is cool too... reminds me of the diablo II soundtrack for some reason... |
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