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The Thrillseekers - Synaethesia (SubSun Remix)
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Hi
Just finished this track, need advice on what to do with it. Cause im still one of those in n00bs ;). So contructive criticism welcomed!
ps transistions suck hairy balls, need help with them :(
The Thrillseekers - Synaethesia (SubSun Remix)
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9.99Mb
8:43
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| Amfora |
listening, intro is a bit empty. basedrum is nice. the pad needs more power imo. Ok there is nothing happen between 1:00 till 2:30 so the song getting bored there. like the synth(but try to open the filter freq more) im missing some full pads on the background i geuss. also try more layered basline. nice attempt but it needs a lot of work.
srry im so negative, i hope u learn something of my opinion ;) |
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| PDM |
| quote: | Originally posted by Amfora
listening, intro is a bit empty. basedrum is nice. the pad needs more power imo. Ok there is nothing happen between 1:00 till 2:30 so the song getting bored there. like the synth(but try to open the filter freq more) im missing some full pads on the background i geuss. also try more layered basline. nice attempt but it needs a lot of work.
srry im so negative, i hope u learn something of my opinion ;) |
Oh boy, you are not negative, this track really needs more dedication and time.
That Pad fading at 0:59, needs more complexity and power, is just too simple, the track was already simple and it needs something capable of getting the attention of the listener.
The synth (Faded in at 2:20 min), there are parts where the frequencies are too high and hurt ears like hell, I think you need 1) Tone down a bit more the volume 2) Compress it better. 3) Use another phasing preset or something.
Try using something else than the typical snare roll for transitions, I mean you used it earlier in the track, use something else later.
I Like the Cosmic-like arp sound, you just need to add more elements to it.
Yeah, needs lots of work.
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| Cynical |
:eyes:
Seriously, you need to listen to some tracks and actually examine their structure. I've never heard a production with such a clear lack of structure before, I'm sorry to tell you that it's very bad!!
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| Subtle |
listening:
u need better structure, as mentioned..
ur on the right track.. but imagen a open hi hat on top of this would make it twice as good..
but u need to keep things more interesting.. for transitions u can use a reverbed cymbal, or remove a kick.. or do a double kick.. and white noise.. etc. |
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| Arctic Breeze |
Watch your language there kid :)
I think this track is allright for a n00b. Tho it's a remix of one of the best trance tunes made in my opinion (and heavily remixed as well) it's still "listenable." One of the things I would like so see different is the clap, triggering on the first beat, not on the second...You could keep the clap there if you got something more powerfull on the second beat... Lots of things to experiment with :) |
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