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[Full Track] Keith McMurray & Marishka - Guest
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
| quote: | Originally posted by keith909
Hey just finished the full version of this Gabriel & Dresden kinda style track. Still need to tweak a bit and throw in some more FX but anyways enjoy and feedback is welcome. Cheers.
http://members.ii.net/~keith_sel/Ke..._Guest_DEMO.MP3 |
Gday fellow Aussie :p :p
Listening.
A slow thumper I see. Reminds me off a Nine Inch Nails song.
Great pianos.
The echo on the vocals goes well.
2.30 The extra note added to the bass is just wrong!
3.00 great break. nice selection of subtle pads.
4.07 Im not sure about the bass. Sounds very 'fabricated' in my opinion. The pianos a bloody beautiful.
Great production here Keith. Good job done by the vocalist :p |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Piano at around 2:27 seems a little too muffled. Fiddle with your filter a bit to get a sound that'll carry better.
The track's got a good groove. I disagree with Xenocreator on the bass. It really makes the mood for the song. |
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| Luke Terry |
this is rather mint, some of the sounds need a bit of tweaking, just add a bit of clarity in the hi-end for the piano + particularly the vox. the way u have a closed hat fill at the end of the break sounds a bit cheap.
apart from this its really well done, but needs filling out a bit, some strings or something.
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| Axolotyl |
Hey there,
Listening now...
Beat is very mellow. Feels quite proggy, very G&D like you say. That bass sounds great. Almost sounds like a really detuned piano note or something. I love how rumbly it feels.
I agree that the piano sounds a bit muffled in parts. Kinda lacks sparkle in the solo sections.
The vocals sound a bit like they are being spoken rather than sung (is that a word?!) in some parts. Not my personal taste, but it fits very well into the track.
I heard Unbelieve out the other night btw. It sounded great on big speakers... great tune =) |
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| pho mo |
This has turned out really beautiful man, the simplicity of the bassline and the piano really makes this tune. It's got a good, solid groove.
Awesome production quality as always, kick drum is perfectly suited for this kind of tune. Each element is absolutely crystal clear.
Regarding the solo sections, the piano does sound a little too dull, but if maybe put some high frequency effects over the top, and it shouldn't matter at all.
I definitely agree with luke about the hats coming out of the break, could probably use some fx over the top.
Excellent work all up! |
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| Sunquest |
hey man, this is pretty good
good piano, its very g and d style indeed, good vocals too
only thing i thinkk u could add is some new wierd sound, like from g and d - arcadia, something catchy and yet different... :)
but still great stuff m8 |
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| PDM |
it needs some clarity in the high end of the pianos like Luke Terry said, but that is the only thing that I consider you need to fix.
Bassline is cool, vocals are sweet, the piano melody itself is beautiful, nice percussion set.
I'll add this to my collection.
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