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Jupiter prime- Gate to heaven (Blu halo remix)
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| boy_luke_y2k |
| I'm downloading now, I'll post a comment when I've heard it, until then I'll just keep the thread at the top with this :D |
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| Transa |
| Come on guys, this is the third time i have uploaded a track i have made and nobody has given feedback. |
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| boy_luke_y2k |
Transa it doesn't work m8, ive tried uncooking it but that doesnt even work, :(
Please fix it! |
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| Transa |
What do you mean when u say it's not workin?
Are you renaming the file and putting .mp3 at the end instead of .txt?
What exactly is wrong? |
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| boy_luke_y2k |
| it sounds completely ed, i remamed it to mp3, when i play it in windows media player its all ed and sounds screatchy and blippy, sounds like its been cooked. i loaded into music match and it lasted for a minute sounding like this playing really fast, so was the clock, i loaded into my editing program internet audio mix and it shows as a 50second-ish long file that sounds like an electronic error with loads of blips, etc. i tried to reconvert it and uncook it but that doesnt work, can you please upload it again coz i think that was the error, a bad upload, try using different webspace. please reply soon coz i wanna hear your stuff, also what do u use to produce? |
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| Transa |
Ok boy luke, i have put it up on a diffrent server.
Both my sig and the first post in the thread have been edited with the new url.
Oh, and theres another version of it i am almost finished making, there is a little sample here for ya too! Enjoy!
http://www.angelfire.com/extreme3/t...halo_remix_.txt |
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| boy_luke_y2k |
| downloading it now. |
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| boy_luke_y2k |
Hooray, it finally works :)
OKAY I'll be brutally honest, its the only way to get better:
1. You need more percussion, when the breaks finish there isnt enough percussion
2. You need a better kick-drum, I'll give you a sample if u wish
3. Unfortunately, it still sounds amateur-ish
4. Make it shorter, around about 5:30 to 6:00
I'll post again later, but I've g2g
Finally, its better than the Tiesto's Shandar vinyl :D |
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| Transa |
Cheers luke. You are 100 percent spot on with the comments. Even though they where negative, it helps for my next tunes.
I think it sounds amatureish really because it was made entierley in software. As i have sed before, once i get the jp-8000 at christmas, im laughing! |
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| robstar |
Itīs a ok track... needs a bit more work.
more percz would be good.
The melody is good though. :)
LATeRZZ:z.zz.z........... |
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| boy_luke_y2k |
| Sorry I was so negative, I'm just trying to help :), I think if you did some more work and thickened the tune and shortened it to around 5:30 - 6:00 you could have a really good tune, I can't wait to hear some of you're stuff after christmas, are you sorted with you're decks yet? |
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