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[trance] Clear Sight - The Bright Sky
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| John |
Hey everyone,
Another thread by me in this short period of time:) This time a solo production made about 3 mothns ago, which isn't 100% finished, but I couldn't be bothered to finish it off so I thought let's post it :p
It's quite summerish/happy (not as in cheese:D) I think.
Clear Sight - The Bright Sky
There are a few things that need to be changed, especially the synth that comes in at 3.15. That's one is the crappiest one on earth I think :D
Bits I like myself are 3.43 and 6.02 :)
Anyway, I hope there is someone outthere who likes it:)
Feedback much appreciated!
John |
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| DJ_TonKs |
| i like the melody, but you need to give more color on your sound i think..especially your lead. if you see what i mean. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
The melody could be a bit more subdued. Have the accent things be more like something ambient that pops in on the left or right channel only, or something like that. Give the melody some originality.
Otherwise, good track. I liked the bassline. |
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| John |
| thanks guys, i'll keep it in mind for the next one :) |
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| djrenco |
| sounds good John:) i like the melodies! pads are a bit reasonish i think;) anyway good job! |
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| Klangzentrum |
hey johnboy! :p
bass and percs fit together very well...
perhaps you could lay some delay on the bass...
that break is really sweet...
but i think there should happen more after it...perhaps a another submelodie...
but itīs great work so far...with some more work this could turn out really great! ;) |
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| Icone |
Pretty nice track there John. I'm not all too fond of the melodies, but it gives a nice feeling.
Carry on ;)
// Wimpie |
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